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Old 01-25-13   #1
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WL's Poetry Corner

In this new DF segment, I will be reciting poetry posted in the poetry forum, and these readings will take place on video. A discussion on said poetry will take place in this thread. Please remember these people are true artists, and please keep it constructive.

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Old 01-25-13   #2
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Wonderful read. I dont understand why some people are so bad at readng. Pisses me off when I'm in school in theyre like the uh-uh-uh underground? pip- pype? Pipeline. SPIT IT OUT JUNIOR WE DONT GOT ALL DAY.
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But more importantly, can someone explain to me how your skin can be dark but your face is pasty white? WTF.
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10/10 would watch again.

Best part is the overly happy presentation, probably not what the author intended, but makes for an enjoyable video.
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THAT'S WHY IT WAS FUNNY!
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I explain the joke because that makes them funnier. Isn't that how it works?
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Old 01-25-13   #7
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You're right. I was thinking too far in the box.
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This sounds more like an exposition than a poem per se.

A Brown Girl Dead, by Countee Cullen:

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With two white roses on her breasts,
White candles at head and feet,
Dark Madonna of the grave she rests;
Lord Death has found her sweet.

Her mother pawned her wedding ring
To lay her out in white;
She’d be so proud she’d dance and sing
To see herself tonight.
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Old 01-26-13   #9
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Quit gaying up my thread or I'll start calling you Mike Brown.
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This sounds more like an exposition than a poem per se.

A Brown Girl Dead, by Countee Cullen:
DM is the gothest member on here, hands down. Only a goth would call a poem and "Exposition per se"
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I hate it when people say per se.
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Sik, I really wanted to change "gothest" to "gayest" but I have refrained myself.
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Burn burn burn down hot topic. Dont lose your soul. Burn down down hot topic.
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Burn burn burn down hot topic. Dont lose your soul. Burn down down hot topic.
i felt the same way when they stopped selling lady gaga shirts.
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Quit gaying up my thread or I'll start calling you Mike Brown.
Bent double, like old beggars under sacks,
Knock-kneed, coughing like hags, we cursed through sludge,
Till on the haunting flares we turned our backs
And towards our distant rest began to trudge.
Men marched asleep. Many had lost their boots
But limped on, blood-shod. All went lame; all blind;
Drunk with fatigue; deaf even to the hoots
Of gas-shells dropping softly behind.

Gas! GAS! Quick, boys!—An ecstasy of fumbling
Fitting the clumsy helmets just in time,
But someone still was yelling out and stumbling
And flound'ring like a man in fire or lime.—
Dim, through the misty panes and thick green light,
As under a green sea, I saw him drowning.

In all my dreams before my helpless sight
He plunges at me, guttering, choking, drowning.

If in some smothering dreams you too could pace
Behind the wagon that we flung him in,
And watch the white eyes writhing in his face,
His hanging face, like a devil's sick of sin,
If you could hear, at every jolt, the blood
Come gargling from the froth-corrupted lungs,
Bitter as the cud
Of vile, incurable sores on innocent tongues,—
My friend, you would not tell with such high zest
To children ardent for some desperate glory,
The old Lie: Dulce et decorum est
Pro patria mori.


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Probably in poor taste considering Holocaust Memorial Day.
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Episode 2: we will be further exploring that paragon of poetry, QUEEN OF THE DAMNED.


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FUCK ME RUNNING, I'M FUCKING PURTY.
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I hope that was her last poem.
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She's got 11 posts, and I'm willing to bet they were all poetry or defense of her poetry. I've got a few other posters in the bag as well. Never fear! We shall continue for always.
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