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Old 12-23-04   #1
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"Your poem is good! I like it!"

White Lily is a patronising cow. Just because she's a mod doesn't mean she has superiority- she can't even spell properly!
She only frequents the poetry forum, yet somehow thinks she's better than me (and others, namely sic, (anti) and Peter, but they probably don't want their names associated with my tirade, so that's just a side note) and proceeds to talk to me as if I'm an imbecil. She's the fucking imbecil.
Defining 'bigot' to me, bloody cheek.

'My boyfriend's an English major'- well I speak the language luv, don't try and win points.

She rubs me up the wrong way and, to her credit, is very successful at making me angry. But I don't think she realises quite how sharp my tongue can be.

Ambiguosity is irritating. To a crap poem 'Yeah that's nice' is just encouraging whichever poor misguided soul penned the damn thing to write more drivel!


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Old 12-23-04   #2
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i uh....i can sympathize.....but i luvs Lily....she's good people....just a lil' too motherly and somewhat naive...
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Motherly.. There's no need to mother me, I have a mother, she does that already.

And naive? Well in which case, maybe she should try and stop her mouth running away with her when in conversation with people who could win medals for arguments. (Me)

You don't have to defend her, I dislike her but it's nothing compared to the deep hatred I have for some people, and they're still alive.
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Some mods of old were like that... They were called... "Sires bitches"

Personally, I never visit the poetry forum because I enjoy telling people that their poetry is shyte. *Shrugs* I don't even offere anything constructive, I just say.. "What a load of tragic goth shyte, you people really need to get a life... Stop usuing the words 'Pain' and 'Black' you numb fackos..." So I decided never to go there again... I pop in there rarely and refrain from posting... But thats just me...

As for Lilly... Who made her a stupidass mod...? I didn't like her much to begin with... I found her.... Kakk! She used to rub me up the wrong way too I think... She kinda stays clear of me... Most posters that I dislike do that... Can't think why.....
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I don't really care if she's a nice person or not; she's a condescending nanny with her head up her ass. I seriously can't believe the things that come out of her mouth, and not just because I disagree; it's literally insane. It does not function within the bounds of coherent thought.

She's a bad choice for moderating such a forum, yes. She's not objective enough. It's like having a super-devout Southern Baptist and KKK member moderate a religion forum
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I want to staple things to her head.
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I want to tell her that she does kakk poetry... Oh and whatever sexy sybs said because I luv her...
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I've not been there mainly because the idea of poetry written by non-professional poets on a goth-friendly board scares the sweet Bejesus out of me.

It would be like looking for a needle in a haystack to find somehting that wasn't psuedo-angst littered bollocks.

'Into the deepest abyss of my pains dark reaches'

Kiss Mine......you halfwit.

Maybe I should go and do my A-level poetry critique style of their poems.

I could make poet laureattes cry

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You make me cry anyway.... Anyway, I think that you should write some kakk poetry for us to seeeeeeeeee

Bloody crazy lawyer type person...
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see...thatz just the thing....me, and well anti as well now, are wantin' to destroy all that shit!!!!! there's some good writers in that section....seriously.....but we also get a lot of that
"my eyes always drip tears
for there are things which i fear
and to cure that for which i am afraid
i slit my wrist and sleep in my grave
and my oh my does my poem suck
i use rhyme scheme and am a gothy cliche fuck"

so yeah.... that shit ain't poetry.....and well, i told one lil' lowly piece of shit writer that they sucked...and BAM!!!! i got attacked....but anti stood up for me (donka) and so now we're on a mission....to completely destroy the poetry section as it sits and take over the world!!!!!!! i mean....yeah, i'm sick of those whiny goth cliched fucks who use rhyme scheme....fuck them, they don't deserve to be there.....but there truly are some wonderful poets....even Lily is damn good at poetry, as is Anti, Velvet is my absolute fuckin' favorite down there, and even i have been known to write a thing or two.....and there's some others, but yeah....um....sorry to have wasted all ya'lls time
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I rarely go there and if I do it's usually just to see what sixxx has to say. Yes, I value his opinion.
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As for Lilly... Who made her a stupidass mod...?
Garg as far as I know at the same time as Fuckdoll who I think personally was a much better Mod for the section. Unfortunately I think its a case of no one wanted to Mod the Poetry section and that's a shame because such a large area of this forum needs more than one Mod because it needs varied input and people with different views in an area that is very diverse when regarding view and thinking...

Again its a case of Garg not being around enough to listen to his members and take notice of where there are problems with this board. Certain areas of this board (including the Poetry section) need reviewing and Mods need updating. It should not be simply a case of being picked on popularity as it so often is, but more a case of who is best for the job...
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i wanna be a mod, i wanna be a mod!!!! oooh, oooh, ooooh, me, me, me, me!
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If it was good poetry aout death for example linking it with sex or birth or something a lot more unexpected I would be mildly imressed.

But dark angst blackness soaked crap really drives me up the wall.

I think that the mods should allow what known as justified critique

these fall into 2 catagories

1) I don't like it. This is an honnest personal statement but it's a little weak.

I don't like it because and then reference the poem in to illustrate your dislikes is a lot more mature an approach.

2) attack the poem directly invloves statements such as

I think this piece is derivative of
I think line/stanza (number) fails because
I think the symbolism is laboured/too subtle
i think it lacks punch/is too direct

These sort of questions are all justified critiques. If I posted part of my mind numbing crap on there I'd expect a lot of justified assualt from this sort of question

There seems to be a sort of primary school 'isn't everyone a special little flower' type mentality which is bollocks. Some people can write some can't. I can howerver critique and if you can't either accept my criticism and use it or take my opinion to task without resorting to whining to mods or calling me god knows what, then you shouldn't be posting your crap on these pages anyway.

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i wanna be a mod, i wanna be a mod!!!! oooh, oooh, ooooh, me, me, me, me!
PM one of the Super Mods and ask. Unlike me, I bet you won't be told you're too controversial.

But I'm not bitter. I'm NOT BITTER! NOT NOT NOT
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Don't you consider that a compliment?
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