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Old 07-01-03   #1
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meh...i am new at this

erm....i dont write poetry, until now i guess. i do not know if i am bad so dont laugh if i am! tell me what ya think....


first time its small
second's in the middle
just cuts on my wrist
its okay, they were little

its only a little blood
no big deal
its my body anyway
this is what i feel

some say its a problem
but i dont see why
doesnt matter to them
no reason to cry

its only a safety pin
its only a knife
its only a little blood
its only my life


yeah...i suck! sadness
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Old 07-01-03   #2
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no it's really good, do you cut?
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Old 07-01-03   #3
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one more bite
one more pound
cant chew
cant stand the sound
they say its okay
cuz im not tall
dont worry about it
just workout, thats all
but they dont know
that i've tried that already
didnt work then
im still too heavy
it doesnt mean theres a problem
just because i dont eat
its alright, i feel fine
its not a disease
i guess i was wrong
but now its too late
whats happened is over
death was my fate

BLAH! i am so bad at this SAD!
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Old 07-01-03   #4
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i have before but not my wrists
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Old 07-01-03   #5
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mm it's bad....and repulsive as I've been told, and it screws up relationships and drives people you love away, the ones you need, they leaave and abandon you it's sad, so do not do it and plus the scars are ugly, trust me and it's embarrasing when you're in public and people ask about them in front of people....akward situation
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i have a star on my leg from a while back, but it has been a long time since i have done anything. and i dont plan on cutting anytime soon
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Old 07-01-03   #7
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good deal, I liked yer poems they flowed nicely
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Old 07-02-03   #8
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jessy!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR POEMS! *mwah mwah* kisses to you, you lovely lovely writer! i love it .

yes what ashy says is true, all cutting does is mess things up....if you have the desire to cut some flesh thats fine, just as long as its not your own!
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I am so good the last time I cut had to be about....2 weeks ago
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Old 07-02-03   #10
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Hey

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I liked your poems...they do flow very nicely. I've been cutting myself for about 4 years now...but finely I've found the right doctor. I used to do it on my wrists and then it moved to my upper arm so my parents wouldn't see but I haven't cut myself in almost a month! That's alot, trust me. Keep writing your poems...they'll help you vent what anger or sadness or whatever it is making you cut. Cya later
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Old 07-02-03   #11
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I agree I was writing to vent then after a while, it didn't work heh but jess does write well, Ive cut everything, legs arms wrists....I don't anymore so but I'm glad you're getting help
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Jessy i dont know where you are, i tried to call you! Call me sometime soon cuz i wanna talk to ya ! i love you
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thank you very much for the compliments! *love to you all* heh anyway, i did call you, yay for me. i will try and write more....if i can. i am not so good at it...oh well, at least you cold get a laugh out of it! okay well, im off for now. maybe i will attempt writing...maybe...okay bye
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Re: meh...i am new at this

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first time its small
second's in the middle
just cuts on my wrist
its okay, they were little

its only a little blood
no big deal
its my body anyway
this is what i feel

some say its a problem
but i dont see why
doesnt matter to them
no reason to cry

its only a safety pin
its only a knife
its only a little blood
its only my life


yeah...i suck! sadness
You suck?
I don't think so. It may be only 2 examples, but you have promise. What matters most is you express what YOU feel, and if someone else feels it. You have hit on a few memories of my own, dredged up a painful time...
That is actually a good thing. I applaud you!
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Old 07-02-03   #15
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aww thank you. i am working on more...no idea what they are gonna be like. i have like 4 others right now but i dont like how they sound too much so im not posting them heh
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Old 07-03-03   #16
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doesnt matter who you are
doesnt matter what you are
talk to anyone
be whoever you want
you you can lie because they can't tell
but just to warn ya, be careful
cuz sometimes you meet someone
who you think is a good guy
but looks like you found
one of the many that lie
you might think it wont be you
you might not believe me
cuz hes a caring, sweet boy
at least thats what you think
and those who think it wont be them
are the ones you hear about later
the ones who secretly met their internet friend
who turned out to be a stranger
not what you had planned, was it?
cuz it would NEVER happen to you
but look who turned up dead in a ditch
oh, and your "friend" got away too

BADNESS! wrote it as i went so dont judge too harshly
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Old 07-03-03   #17
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do i go, or do i stay?
should i risk it, or should i not?
will it be worth it if i leave?
if i go will i get caught?
all these questions in my head
so many worries in my mind
all these thoughts add to the stress
should i risk it for just one night?
i wonder if hes a stalker
is he a messed old man
what if he tries to hurt me?
i'll fight back...if i can
hope this isnt the end
cuz in my eyes, its only the start
i cant stand worrying anymore
its tearing me apart

*shakes head at self*
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guess thats all for now...they are getting worse sad!
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I like the last one. the other one, could use a bit of work, but it has real potential, it's just a little rough around the edges. good job hun
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thanks for your input! hehe, i will have to work on it later.
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