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Old 07-23-02   #61
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hmm... so much going on in my head...

this whole thing with a friend of mine really bugs... seems some people always need to be with somebody in order to feel important... it also seems that it is always those people who get trampled on the most... who knows, maybe they ask for it... maybe it's just foul luck...

anyway, on with life... still trying to find out more about the whole New england trip... There is something in New Hmpshire called america's stonehenge... sounds interesting... Plymouth rock... course that is the whole history thing i mentioned before... ah well, the trip isn't until oct 6, so i have a while...

and last, i really need to get back to work...

hmm...

hello wow its been ages since i have been in your journal... yeah i know what you mean on always having to be with people... like i need to be with bill cliten to be important joke

anyways i hope that you have a good time on your trip... it sounds neato... oh i read your third peace to your story...

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Old 08-10-02   #64
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some stats on my writings that I happened to be quite amused by:

Title ~Description
Rating (Votes) Views Category Date Status

the voting is on a scale of 1-5, 5 being best. Personally, though my votes are mostly good, i don't much care about them... but check out how many views i have...!

Story Submissions:

A Contracting Nightmare ~She ends up with more than she wanted.
4.22 (37) 11879 NonConsent 08/01/02 approved


A Titillating Reunion Day 1 ~Long-awaited reunion starts off with a bang.
4.18 (17) 4115 BDSM 06/23/02 approved


A Titillating Reunion Day 2 ~Their reunion is bigger bang than she expected.
4.20 (10) 4494 BDSM 06/27/02 approved


A Titillating Reunion Day 3 ~He leaves someone else in charge.
4.00 (6) 2369 BDSM 07/13/02 approved


Daddy’s Darlin' Ch. 2 ~She takes a ride with daddy.
4.43 (35) 1962 Incest 08/10/02 approved


Daddy’s Darlin’~ On the ranch with daddy for her birthday.
4.35 (62) 4838 Incest 08/09/02 approved


Trouble~ Young girl finds trouble when she stops at bar.
4.38 (58) 21701 NonConsent 06/01/02 approved


Poetry Submissions

A Sonnet for a Heart Adrift No Description.
4.00 (1) 130 Non-Erotic Poetry 06/05/02 approved


A Vision of Dark Desire No Description.
4.50 (4) 184 Erotic Poetry 06/01/02 approved


Adatto Liquido a Succhiamento No Description.
3.00 (1) 33 Erotic Poetry 08/06/02 approved


An Afternoon Delight No Description.
4.17 (6) 174 Erotic Poetry 05/30/02 approved


Aphrodisia No Description.
3.00 (1) 89 Erotic Poetry 06/26/02 approved


Attraction No Description.
3.75 (4) 201 Erotic Poetry 05/31/02 approved


Carnal Knowledge No Description.
3.00 (1) 104 Erotic Poetry 06/26/02 approved


Death Alive No Description.
5.00 (1) 124 Non-Erotic Poetry 06/02/02 approved


Dream No Description.
2.00 (1) 124 Erotic Poetry 06/26/02 approved


FuckDoll No Description.
3.80 (10) 547 Erotic Poetry 06/01/02 approved


Insanity No Description.
0.00 (0) 98 Non-Erotic Poetry 06/02/02 approved


Me No Description.
4.00 (1) 134 Non-Erotic Poetry 06/02/02 approved


Midnight Delight (A Sexual Sequel) No Description.
4.00 ( 153 Erotic Poetry 05/31/02 approved


Midnight Prayers No Description.
2.00 (1) 80 Erotic Poetry 06/26/02 approved


Pleasurable Agony No Description.
4.25 (4) 174 Erotic Poetry 05/30/02 approved


Posterior Sacrifice No Description.
4.00 ( 202 Erotic Poetry 06/01/02 approved


Rapturous Lust No Description.
3.40 (5) 148 Erotic Poetry 06/14/02 approved


Reflection No Description.
0.00 (0) 112 Non-Erotic Poetry 06/02/02 approved


Rough & Ready No Description.
3.50 (2) 113 Erotic Poetry 06/26/02 approved


Sanctification No Description.
4.50 (2) 93 Erotic Poetry 05/31/02 approved


Vituperation No Description.
4.50 (4) 138 Erotic Poetry 05/30/02 approved
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Old 08-12-02   #65
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i had a uh.... special friend who had to spend a couple weeks in jail.... he came over last night... it was nice to see him again.... hehe...

been doing a lot of writing lately, but it seems nobody around the hallowed halls of Df are too interested in reading... well, maybe i should rephrase that.... because it seems my stuff gets the views, but not the replies... perhaps everyone around likes my stories and poems and what not they are just too chicken shit, that somebody else might see what they posted to actually post... hmm... that's a thought.... well, that or everyone just hates me... lol







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Old 08-12-02   #66
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Writing thorough critiques is hard work. I'd rather read it (which I just did) and say nothing than read it and give you a quick "good work. keep it up," which is about as heartfelt and sincere as those little Valentines we used to pass out in elementary school. I'm working on getting around to everyone's poetry, though. Yours is harder for me to respond to because I have VERY little experience with erotic poetry. I'll try though, I swear.
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Old 08-12-02   #67
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true that, and thanks, i wasn't speaking of everyone. There are people who do read and respond to my writing... I do appreciate it, and I get absolutly tons of feedback from the other sources i submit my writing to... (some of it is rather disturbing) but anyway.... enough of my rambling... (all my writing isn't erotic... I have some rated g material disney approved)

i always got the most 10cent valentines in elementary school.... wouldn't mind getting them now...
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I think i may have perhaps done something smart today... I got a new email address for the large story sites i submit my stories to. (Literotica & storiesonline.org) They get 10's of thousands of reads, and I get quite a bit of 'fan-mail' (big ego stroke). Lately there have been some that are rather disturbing... for example:

this one was about a story called "A Tittilating Reunion" (M/f, D/s, c, bdsm)
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I enjoyed the story but it was a little mild for my tastes. Robert should have beat the shit out of her before they went out to eat. Mark her body a little and then have her show a bruise or two and a black eye to the folks in the restualant and make her tell the waitress how much she enjoyed the ass whipping. I always wish I could really read a really serious good torture and SM story. He should have also found a place where homeless drug addicts congregate and make her fuck everyone there without protection. Birth control should be outlawed by Robert also. If she is impregnated, she should be constantly reminded that she will probably have an aids infected child. Robert should, of course, use condoms on her to remain dd free. Remind her of her good fortune and that she will live, but barely, after her time with him is over.
and this was about a story called "A Contracting Nightmare?" (M+/f, nc)

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Liked your story but not quite rough enough for me. I would have liked it better if she had been married and they had beat the shit out of her and cut her up a little, threatening to kill her old man if she said anything about them, maybe fucking or hurting her kids. If that didn't get her to agree to fuck them, they could have snuffed the worthless cunt in the garage. Put her in the car, and made it look like she was so ashamed at what she
did, that she started her car,ran a hose in the car from the tailpipe, and killed herself.
Nothing directed at me per se, but nonetheless, I think maybe it better if I detach myself at this point rather than later. Dunno, but why the hell not.

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I wanted to put this here, and it's my journal.... so i can...

from a few months ago:

I Cry

I'm sorry for the way I am today.
A heart on the verge of tears.
So overwhelming-
Sadness is enveloping me.
Alone.
In a world full of people-
Alone.
That's the way it is for me
Tossed to the side
"She's strong, she'll be fine."
But hurting inside.
Forgoton, ignored.
Bothersome to those who would spare me a moment.
I try
I try to keep my head up.
But alone I get tired.
And weak.
My weary bloodshot eyes are tired from the tears.
My chest aches from the pain.
I'm scared
I see glimpses of my old face
The shaking
The rocking
The flashbacks
I don't want to go there again
Please don't let me go there again
My eyes welling up at this request
My fright....
I am so scared of that
That place I once was
It seems like I am wanted there.
The hands are pulling me back to my darkest hour
It's getting hard to fight
It's getting harder to walk on
Alone.
In a world full of people, I'm alone.
The slightest nicety peaks my interest
The slightest kind word catches my ear
It means so much
truly,
honestly,
it means so much.
But the words don't come.
And the niceties wear away once the skin is shed
What's wrong with me?
That people always forsake me...
I wish I knew.
I wish I knew.
Crying now, my eyes they burn
The tears like acid down my face
Always alone.
I am not who people think I am.
I'm alone.
Can't there be somebody out there who feels that desire?
Who longs for ME.
Who wants ME.
I only get the insults.
"Worthless!" I've been called.
"Stuid, dumb, and a bitch."
With magnetic intensity I can usually repel them.
Some are now getting through.
The shaking,
The rocking,
The flashbacks renew.
Please don't let me go there again.
For words I have never said I am hated.
For thoughts I have never thought I am cast aside.
With outstretched arms I wait.
Waiting for what, I don't know.
Maybe just a kind word,
Maybe even a smile.
I'm getting old waiting.
Please don't let me go there again.

-jo
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Old 08-14-02   #71
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A Jo journal!! What fun! HEHEHEHEHeheh...............

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Them Against Us

Finding simple pleasures
Obscurely painted with logic.
A Lack of understanding,
Masquerading under the guise of humanity.
The 'Beast' of the world
Hiding in the most accepted;
The Doers, The Go-getters.
Looking down from their mighty thrones.
Astonished by free-though,
Captivated by their own fetish filled fantasies.
The Policy-Makers, The Law-Fakers,
Pointing their unclean hands.
Their wisdom encompasses boundless ignorance;
Their hate filled love of 'the people'.
Desire to be admired and glorified.
With indignation they cast the first stone,
With dignity we catch it,
Keep it,
Learn about it.
We KNOW.
We may not say, but we KNOW
We see thru eyes of others gone before us.
I am here and you are here and we know who we are.
Admonished for our visions,
Defiled for love of the populace.
Disgraced by the ideals of our captors,
The mighty Label-Makers,
And the bought Policy-Shapers.
We KNOW.
We will KNOW.
We always KNOW.
When suck in their darkened impish minds,
We will see thru and KNOW.
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Today I came the closest I've ever been.
Well, not the closest,
As I've had the blade yanked from my hand.
But closest in my head.

Farther down than ever.
More disgusted by the state of things than I could handle.

Sick and twisted.
Would have let them win.
For a moment,
Would have given in.

I'm just too strong.

My own will to fight, my own crying might-
Took me to the edge,
Stripped all my shame.
None left, no shame,
Only pain.

Holding hands with humility.
Whilst spitting in its face.
I can't see the future through the flames.
I can't stand up to be knocked down once again.

I'm just too strong.
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alas, that momentary sense of community and shown itself to be overwhelming.
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Quiescence
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
A gentle rage hearkened my rise
with a face, well known.
Glistening the morning, the large trucks,
taking the compost home.
Following me with figurative flair.

Touch me tomorrow, or I will be there.
Fondle my heart
with those mechanized hands,
gripping me-
in hypnotic measures of rhythm.

The bass;
it plays a suggestive harmony while
the drummer;
echoes his song in my brain.

Taken by the lost, kept by the unwilling.
What else matters?

Push me down, comfort here.
Under the ground
with those that crawl as
low as my ability lets
me

Seeing the world spin
faster through your glasses.
My eyes hurt, knees weak.
Head torn.

Breathing lackadaisical memories.
Finding an even deeper reflection of this girl,
defunct.
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