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Old 12-14-03   #1
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the light that enters my window speaks of the wind so strong it blinds me to my eternal dark and gloomy paradox it smells of rotting hopes and dreams decaying of their mortal beings. speaking of the truth that lied its way into an eternity that shall be forever more. Watching, waiting, into the darkness it stands peering. thinking that it can and never will reach its fiery hell of a paradise that lies in the eternal blinding light tof the darkness beyond.
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Old 12-14-03   #2
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Old 12-14-03   #3
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Old 12-14-03   #4
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Straight from Write-your-own-goth-poetry.com
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lets see its arms, i bet they have the marking of pathetic on them.
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Old 12-14-03   #7
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Straight from Write-your-own-goth-poetry.com

That it could possibly be, yet I have to say from what I've encountered "Gothic" poetry (if there is such a thing) usually has a handle on correct spelling. (Amongst other things)
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I didn't think Ankhat really had a problem with spelling. Sentence structure, grammar, and sense of the language, perhaps.
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the light that enters my window speaks of the wind so strong it blinds me to my eternal dark and gloomy paradox it smells of rotting hopes and dreams decaying of their mortal beings. speaking of the truth that lied its way into an eternity that shall be forever more. Watching, waiting, into the darkness it stands peering. thinking that it can and never will reach its fiery hell of a paradise that lies in the eternal blinding light tof the darkness beyond.
To quote the Lord Jesus Christ: "What?"
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To quote the Lord Jesus Christ: "What?"
oddly enough, that is the funniest damn thing i've heard all day.
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