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Old 10-28-01   #641
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that was really good, it was about yesterday right, but it was really good, i like the line, blood gushing out of my mouth,
yet no one seems to know,

i really like that part cause i felt what you were saying.
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Old 10-28-01   #642
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Thanks hun...but i hope that never happens again...I don't really like the whole nose getting shoved into my brain thing! now my eye is all fucked up....can't see!!! But thanks again...
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Old 10-28-01   #643
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My poor little Demon

Poor thing, me so worried about you hun, hope you are ok, come talk to me and I'll cheer you up.


Here' a pic, hope its cheer you up a bit.
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Old 10-28-01   #644
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Sorry here's the pic
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Old 10-28-01   #645
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weep for those who have no souls

I weep for those who can who read , and see only words .
Because they lack the heart to see beyond the words and into the emotions reflected in your work , which I liked demon keep it up sis !
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Old 10-28-01   #646
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thank you laz....I appreciate your words. oddly enough those words are sad...yet true. I hope you come back and talk to me some time...thank you very much for your reply.... I don't feel so ignored now.
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Never Again

Washed away
As if I didn't exsist
Fallen upon the ground
Yet you can't pick me up
Run out
Of living this life which I hate
I thought you cared
As if you loved me
Never again
Will I trust a man's word
His lies sinking in
Like a knife to my heart
Never again
Will I fall to your charm
Sweeping me off my feet
And seduce me like a snake charmer
Never again
Will I let my heart go
Allowing your horrid world
To use me as your toy
Never again
Will I live
Never again
Will I win my soul back
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Old 10-28-01   #648
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So sad my friend, wish we coul talk....
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Old 10-28-01   #649
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Old 10-29-01   #650
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For future reference.....

Soon there will be many poems posted on this thread under the name Mayla Raine....all the poems have been written by me...though when I first joined I was under a different name....some of you may have read them...others may have not...so be prepared.
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Old 10-29-01   #651
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Quote:
Originally posted by Demon's Eclipse
Never Again

Washed away
As if I didn't exsist
Fallen upon the ground
Yet you can't pick me up
Run out
Of living this life which I hate
I thought you cared
As if you loved me
Never again
Will I trust a man's word
His lies sinking in
Like a knife to my heart
Never again
Will I fall to your charm
Sweeping me off my feet
And seduce me like a snake charmer
Never again
Will I let my heart go
Allowing your horrid world
To use me as your toy
Never again
Will I live
Never again
Will I win my soul back
Sad... And cold.

I love it.

Trust... A funny thing, trust. Readilly given, easilly lost, too fragile to build anew.

::sigh:: Alone we are made, alone we live, alone we die.

'Tis a shame, though... That we allow one fools mistakes to punish so many others.

Nice poem, Demon. Hope to see more soon.
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Old 10-29-01   #652
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Blame me for Yourself
Blame me
For all my wrongs
Blame me
For society's flaws
Blame me
For the shitty days that have come
Blame me
For all you've done
Forgive me
For what I'm become
Forgive me
For the past
Forgive me
For all that you've lost
Forgive me
For all the lies that separated us
Redeem you
For all your faults
Reedem you
For the way you treat me
Redeen you
For all the shit you put me through
Redeem you
For never listening to me
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Demon's Past

Ok this is me!!!! And Mayla Raine is my old account and name....and with help I brought the old poems back...so enjoy....
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Old 10-30-01   #654
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Again


Here I am again
Walking this very fine line
To the brink of insanity
Just for once let me fall

Tired of living on and on
You say I am so very strong
But why is it you are the one
Who always tears me down

Once I get the strength to move on
You shove the past back into my face
And tell me I don't feel emotion
I'm not as I used to be when I was with you

Deception is the key to you
You make me see something
You make me feel something
And then destroy it to see me go through pain

How long do I have to hold it in
Before you knock me down again
I'm to the point of destructing myself
Just so you can't do it to me again

Redemption was asked for
And I thought it was given
Then you play this same game
And turn your back on me

You have dishonest eyes
That watch my weakness
You give me fake support
To watch me crumble again

I think you enjoy this
More than you enjoy life
You like pissing me off
And yet you beg for forgiveness

I am jumping off that fine wire
Now you can't touch me
For I am to far from reach
And you were the one who pushed me this far
Hmm...

I like this one.

I think, on average, your stuff writing as "Demon's Eclipse" is better than the stuff written as "MaylaRaine," (just my half-useless opinion) but I rather like this one.

Problem is, I don't know why. Can't quite pin down any particular reason... And that bugs me.

Oh, well...

Write more, have fun.
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Old 10-31-01   #655
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I hope you all like this one...

I was trying to think of a way to write a poem that could reach out to everyone in some way...and the best way was to write this...It may mean nothing to some...but I feel that we all share a little bit of this in our lives and in our hearts.

Terror of our World

Vanishing in a breif moment
Our lives seem to fade
Falling from the hopes and dreams
That have made us a united nation
Hopless cries creep through the ashes
Of a destroyed home and past
Swept away from our eyes
Now lies in a pile of rumble and tears
Blood flows like rivers
Bodies lay covered
Tangled in metal and concrete
The cities collapse
As our leader falls to death
Our Beloved Country
Falls to it's horrified end
As families hold their last breath
Wishing...
Hoping...
This hatred will cease
And yet children scream
And people mourn their loved one's deaths
This hatred is a neverending war
That will not stop it's bloodshed
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Old 10-31-01   #656
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Wheeewww.

Nice.

Really says a lot.

"As our leader falls to death "
I'm afraid I don't understand this line...
Forgive me, I'm oxygen-deprived at the moment.


As for the rest of it, I like the symbolism...

I'm wondering if I'm reading too much into it, but I like the question posed of American reaction to innocent Amerocan citizens. I've never understood the human desire for a target, a focus to blame...

Anyway, I think this piece says a lot. One of your finest, by far.
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Old 11-07-01   #658
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Sire, Arsinik or whoever with the chance of erasing threads:
Demons Eclipse ( the old Mayla Raine) wishes this thread to be deleted, it is copied under her current name. I would wish this thread to be deleted too. Thanks.
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