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Old 01-31-13   #41
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Probably not because he was stationed at NAVSEA from 98 - 07. And before that Camp Lejeune.

Now he's a retired officer and freelance writer with a titanium spine.
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Old 01-31-13   #42
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I see, what a glorious inspiration to write, seeing those people and places.
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Old 01-31-13   #43
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Mostly he writes about war. It's kind of depressing.
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Old 02-22-13   #44
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New episode!

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I enjoyed the giggling, really drove the point of the poem home. You should start a youtube channel happily reading goth poetry from the interwebs.
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Old 02-23-13   #46
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I only like being full of shit in the comfort of my goth home.
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Old 02-23-13   #47
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Aww, kitty.

I feel like that poem fell into the trap of telling rather than showing.

"You can't have your characters just say how they're feeling! That makes me angry!" - Robot Devil
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Old 02-23-13   #48
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You should have seen it written. Don't get me wrong; I often speak in text lingo just to be a dick. I sometimes type it for the lulz. But I would never do it earnestly, and I wouldn't fucking type "ur" in a poem. Mostly because I don't write poems cuz they're way gay.
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Old 03-24-17   #49
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I think I should resurrect The WL's Poetry Corner with a new batch of poems.
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Old 03-29-17   #50
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I concur.
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That's a great idea..... as long as you don't expect me to contribute.

I started awful and I've gotten worse.... Now I it would sound like someone had leant on a goth version of the autocomplete

Dark shadow angst, angst pain, angst, self-indulgent twaddle.....

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