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Old 11-06-03   #1
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Originally Posted by Ridley
"Love?"

With a tear streaming down her chin, disgusted and appalled
The keys dangled in her delicate hands quivering in turn.
Despite every intuition she has, she knows she has to do this one thing;
She begins to slide one key then the other from the ring, its rusted brass,
And green aluminum steel ring. He can’t treat her this way she knows, but maybe he can.
She “knows” It’s not over reacting to the issues at hand. Right?
With a hollow thump on the creamy shag, the keys lay there. He stares at them unmoving.
She begins to turn and he doesn’t care, so she opens the door sobbing and waits for him to intervene.
He doesn’t...
She turns crying, red faced mascara running deep, like a spring river choked by winters dying hands.

A pause… merely a moment, but in desperation a year.

Running to his frigid arms, hating him, but needing him.
Wanting to tell him how she wishes he was dead, just because he was “stronger”.
Not because it’s so, but because it’s power struggle…
Who wants to be the weak link of a partnership?
He starts to rub her back as she cries desperately into his chest.
“Baby… baby” she says before choking on an ocean of salty tears.
He says nothing, but keeps rubbing her back… maybe this is
His way, his cowardly way to say he is sorry things went to far.
But she’s too weak to notice the irony that she has given in, so much for reason…pride… undeniable anger… intuition and fear have won. Or? Or maybe it was love?


nice expression, easily felt I like it
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bastard... i think the poem sucks by the way, but it reminded me of somehting that happend to me..
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