Darkforum.com - Dark Stories, Dark Art, Poetry, Photography, Debates and Discussions
Home Register FAQ
Go Back   Darkforum.com - Dark Stories, Dark Art, Poetry, Photography, Debates and Discussions > The Pen > The Smoke Room
Reload this Page your thoughts on darkforum poetry?
The Smoke Room Discuss your thoughts on darkforum poetry? in the The Pen forums; Originally Posted by Madpoet stuff here is better than that contemporary garbage you find in bookstores HAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. That's the funniest thing I've ever read in the poetry section. ...

Register and remove some of the ads
Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
  (#21) Old
(antihero) is Offline
N/A
(antihero) will become famous soon enough
 
(antihero)'s Avatar
 
Posts: 18,441
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: Aug 2000
Location: Cleveland, OH
Zodiac Sign: Taurus
Rating: 1 Votes / 4.00 Average
Credits: 296,746
   
02-17-04

Quote:
Originally Posted by Madpoet
stuff here is better than that contemporary garbage you find in bookstores

HAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. That's the funniest thing I've ever read in the poetry section. What "contemporary garbage" are you referring to?
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#22) Old
>FuckDoll< is Offline
hate hate hate
>FuckDoll< will become famous soon enough
 
>FuckDoll<'s Avatar
 
Posts: 11,495
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: Aug 2001
Location: SoCal
Zodiac Sign: Gemini
Rating: 1 Votes / 4.00 Average
Credits: 1,349
   
02-17-04

I'm interested to know what you're referring to as well Madpoet... are they other peoples personal chapbooks or something? (don't jump all over the guy... perhaps he manages to only read the good stuff Df puts out.)

Anyway, I think we all can agree that more honest critique needs to be happening out there, but you've got to give it to get it. And no, not everyone is willing to reciprocate, but I'm sure the people in this thread are, so that's a start.

Ahem... you also need to actually write and post poems in order for people to comment/critique them... hint, hint.


Don't Drink and Park. Accidents cause people.


To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#23) Old
Madpoet is Offline
Idiot Savant
Madpoet
 
Madpoet's Avatar
 
Posts: 824
Gallery: 0
Comments: 1
Join Date: Apr 2002
Zodiac Sign: Aries
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 21,128
   
02-18-04

eh i couldn't give names (i'd have to bother going back to them!) but i've seen too much bland, uninteresting stuff that i can't relate to. Almost everything local (Aus) is pastoral *vomit*. Then there's that "I come from a strange land..." shit that wins awards. And i've heard some that sounded like anecdotes.
Am I alone on this?
Well that's my own experiences through various bookstores and radio shows and competitions *shrugs*


FD, was that hint for me? I don't write anymore. This well's gone dry (a cliche )



To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.




To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#24) Old
>FuckDoll< is Offline
hate hate hate
>FuckDoll< will become famous soon enough
 
>FuckDoll<'s Avatar
 
Posts: 11,495
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: Aug 2001
Location: SoCal
Zodiac Sign: Gemini
Rating: 1 Votes / 4.00 Average
Credits: 1,349
   
02-19-04

It's a hint for all of you who haven't been writing lately.

Ya know, I was just thinking that I really don't follow too many 'new' poets. At least not from the last 25 years or so... Some people I know personally, and are fond of, sure... but that's it, and that's interesting to me.


Don't Drink and Park. Accidents cause people.


To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#25) Old
white lily is Offline
The Moon's Souless Flower
white lily is on a distinguished road
 
white lily's Avatar
 
Posts: 6,517
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: Apr 2001
Location: Canada
Zodiac Sign: Taurus
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 207,488
   
02-19-04

I have too agree with madpoet, most of the "great poetry" that I had to read in school or uni sucked and I hated it. Sure there are some poems that are published that I was exposed to that was great, but most of it I wanted to ri[ my eyes out before having to read again. Might of been the age and environment that I was, or not, I don't know. But I do find more interesting poetry in here then I ever did in school or published books....*except the few books that I have been published in, those had some good stuff in it*.


Just follow the trail of broken hearts and destroyed lives, at the end........I'll be waiting.
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#26) Old
_black phoenix_ is Offline
frosted melancholic
_black phoenix_ is on a distinguished road
 
_black phoenix_'s Avatar
 
Posts: 34
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: bc, canada
Zodiac Sign: Aries
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 1,338
   
02-20-04

i also agree with madpoet.. i have gone in search of new and interesting poetry only to find "cowboy poetry," "1000 new love poems," and crap like that. its pretty hard to come across recently published poetry that is worth the time. as for the older stuff, the romantics were great.

i cant remember who it was, but earlier in the conversation they had said that few of the people who post poetry here actually read poetry. i agree completely. its easy to tell that many people are just spewing stuff out and waiting for other poets to say "good job, youre special" and give them a pat on the back.

just going through and picking out random threads to read, it felt as though there was no effort put into many of the poems. quite a few had major typos, spelling mistakes, and grammar mistakes. its alright if that happens every now and then, but if its all the time it is probably due to a lack of care for their poetry.

back to the subject matter.. i agree that more replying needs to be done. yes, i realize that im new, so im sure my opinion wont count for as much.. but i just wanted to let you guys knwo that the lack of constructive criticsim was very noticable right away. i will personally try my best to make replies, but i cant guarantee too much. i find it very difficult to leave a response if i dont like the poetry at all.. i feel like too much of a jerk just pointing out faults.

anyways, thats it for now.
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#27) Old
Madpoet is Offline
Idiot Savant
Madpoet
 
Madpoet's Avatar
 
Posts: 824
Gallery: 0
Comments: 1
Join Date: Apr 2002
Zodiac Sign: Aries
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 21,128
   
02-20-04

I read extremely little, mainly due to aforementioned reasons. The only stuff i've been exposed to is mainly early 20thC french poets, the Romantics, and some good english/american 20thC stuff. Other than that, influence comes from music lyrics and poetic novelists. It's hard to find stuff we can relate to.



To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.




To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#28) Old
white lily is Offline
The Moon's Souless Flower
white lily is on a distinguished road
 
white lily's Avatar
 
Posts: 6,517
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: Apr 2001
Location: Canada
Zodiac Sign: Taurus
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 207,488
   
02-21-04

black you oppinion counts for just as much as everyone elses oppinion does. if you read something there is alwas something good about it, even if it is structure of the poem, a phrase or an idea of the poem. mention a good thing and then a few ideas of how to improve the poem, if the writer doesn't want to improve then you know not to go into that thread again.


Just follow the trail of broken hearts and destroyed lives, at the end........I'll be waiting.
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#29) Old
(antihero) is Offline
N/A
(antihero) will become famous soon enough
 
(antihero)'s Avatar
 
Posts: 18,441
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: Aug 2000
Location: Cleveland, OH
Zodiac Sign: Taurus
Rating: 1 Votes / 4.00 Average
Credits: 296,746
   
02-21-04

Yous guys are reading the wrong stuff. Yeah, unless you're in actual creative writing courses, the stuff you read in school is gonna be the boring stuff that everyone in the universe has read over and over. If I read one more Robert Frost poem, I'm going to start murdering people.

But yeah, you need to in on what's happening in poetry NOW. Keep your eyes on the offbeat, surrealist, abstract stuff that's on the forefront. A lot of it can be found on the Internet, actually; you just have to know where to look. Look at FuckDoll's 'zine thread and check those places out. I recommend www.sidereality.com and www.canwehaveourballback.com as good starting points.
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#30) Old
Madpoet is Offline
Idiot Savant
Madpoet
 
Madpoet's Avatar
 
Posts: 824
Gallery: 0
Comments: 1
Join Date: Apr 2002
Zodiac Sign: Aries
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 21,128
   
02-22-04

yeah, i read some of those links.



To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.




To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#31) Old
>FuckDoll< is Offline
hate hate hate
>FuckDoll< will become famous soon enough
 
>FuckDoll<'s Avatar
 
Posts: 11,495
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: Aug 2001
Location: SoCal
Zodiac Sign: Gemini
Rating: 1 Votes / 4.00 Average
Credits: 1,349
   
03-02-04

so have we come to any conclusion?


Don't Drink and Park. Accidents cause people.


To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#32) Old
Guy_Person is Offline
Unvested Dandy
Guy_Person is on a distinguished road
 
Guy_Person's Avatar
 
Posts: 4,852
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: Aug 2001
Location: Isn't she just like certain people I could name?
Zodiac Sign: Gemini
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 119,595
   
03-02-04

My only thought on DF poetry is that people need to use the Editing Room early and often.



To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules

Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On


Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Darkforum Convention T-shirt Ideas Demon's Eclipse Art 4 05-13-07 17:59
Some poems... lingering thoughts.. ~BlooDy MarY~ Poetry 29 10-22-04 09:45
Poetry Challenge: Titles >FuckDoll< The Smoke Room 22 05-15-04 14:05
My poetry darkswirls Poetry 3 02-11-04 18:08
Beat Generation Poetry quiz >FuckDoll< The Smoke Room 2 02-05-04 16:36

Galleries
Toggle Newest Thumbs
My new car
RPG
Got Nades?
For Tiggs
A Storm Approaches
A Storm Approaches
A Storm Approaches
The Day I Moved In
blah
Just Me Again

Powered by vBadvanced CMPS v3.0 RC2


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.6.8
Copyright ©2000 - 2008, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
LinkBacks Enabled by vBSEO 3.1.0
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com

© 2006 - 2008 Dark Forum | About Dark Forum | Legal | A member of the Crowdgather Forum Community


1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53