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Yes, that is what you said, and that's what we disagree with: the whole "give good with the bad" argument. You are arguing that positive criticism is "good," and negative criticism is "bad." Our argument is that there IS no "bad" criticism; there's either criticism, or flat out moronic insults. Anything that helps is "good." If you're saying we should give good criticism on top of giving insults, then no; I don't like insulting peoples' work.
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and um....screw Cannibal Holocaust, if you really wanna question whether or not sumtin' is "art" then go watch Salo (aka 120 Days of Sodom) or maybe even I Spit on Your Grave or Thriller: A Cruel Picture (aka They Call Her One Eye) or....y'know, i could go on and on and on.....
anywho.....um.....i think that all this is gettin' out of hand....so far no one seems to be bitchin' lately, and all seems calm here in the poetry section, and i really think all this was just a big mess which i admit to starting, but itz been resolved.....i really think there isn't an issue anymore....i've been givin' my critiques, both postive and negative, and it seems like everyone is handling it just fine.....but if ever in the future someone seems to have a problem with it, fuck 'em....let them come up to me if they got problem, not pussy-foot around and bitch to Lily.....you don't have to play mother.....and i'd appreciate it if people didn't attack other people's critiques....if you got sumtin' to say about someone's poem, or style, thatz fine, but don't go around critiquin' sumeone's critique......
anywho, yeah....i don't really see what the big issue is anymore, as there seemingly isn't an issue.....so tally-ho! I was masturbating
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Originally Posted by (antihero) you're always a geeza | i see you're already putting your newfound knowledge to the test  i believe in practicing compassion. | |
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you guys are arguing symantics (sp?). whether you have issue with me saying give good with bad or the positive criticism with the negative criticism then whatever the message was meant to be the same. Just follow the trail of broken hearts and destroyed lives, at the end........I'll be waiting. | |
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Originally Posted by Sybs You may construe it as negative, but if your sensitive poetic souls can't handle a negative comment or two then you shouldn't be presenting your precious work in a public forum.. | Can nobody give their oppinion with out making it personal? holy shit you would all fail anything related to debates. Quote: |
Originally Posted by Sybs And as a thing- so what that your boyfriend is an English major? You're Canadian, you don't even speak English, so don't shit on my language with any assumed superior knowledge. | blah blah......that is a bigoted (def: One who is strongly partial to one's own group, religion, race, or politics and is intolerant of those who differ.)
comment that is completely uncalled for. Not to mention, English is the primary language in Canada, and we've kept the language closer to the origin of it than the bastardization that has happened within many other places. Just follow the trail of broken hearts and destroyed lives, at the end........I'll be waiting. | |
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Originally Posted by white lily Can nobody give their oppinion with out making it personal? holy shit you would all fail anything related to debates. | Just storing this for prosperity. Thanks. Find out exactly what to think, next.
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i don't think i've made it personal whatsoever.......
i ain't angry with anyone or with this topic, and i thought it was a very good topic as well....but alas, i don't think there's an issue really....i mean, after going back over it all in my head, i really think all this started because of Ruka's thread....well, thatz in the past....letz move forward, into the FUTURE!!!!!! with skittles I was masturbating
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Originally Posted by white lily Can nobody give their oppinion with out making it personal? holy shit you would all fail anything related to debates.
blah blah......that is a bigoted (def: One who is strongly partial to one's own group, religion, race, or politics and is intolerant of those who differ.)
comment that is completely uncalled for. Not to mention, English is the primary language in Canada, and we've kept the language closer to the origin of it than the bastardization that has happened within many other places. | Ok, firstly, it was not a bigoted comment. I was making a point, that your boyfriend being an English major has absolutely no clout with the likes of me, it's worth nothing, so you can go and 'shove it where the sun don't shine'. Don't presume shit about me when you have absolutely no idea.
I'll say what I want, called for or not, I don't have to answer to you.
And as for the failing in debates? I can argue until the cows come home, and very eloquently thankyou. I just dislike you on a personal level, for your ambiguous opinions and presumptuosness, and thus don't find it necessary to be polite towards you. At all. In any way. A golden energy
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This time I'm an electric wire
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At. Least. I. Can. Spell. A golden energy
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Originally Posted by sixxx(sic)six letz move forward, into the FUTURE!!!!!! | I didn't see this before I posted a reply. My bad. A golden energy
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Originally Posted by Sybs I didn't see this before I posted a reply. My bad. | You forgot the Skittles. Taste the rainbow. i believe in practicing compassion. | |
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Yeah I'm more of a Smartie girl myself. Taste the chocolate! A golden energy
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*Sticks oar in, thereby dragging thread back to original topic, sorry.*
Anyone who is serious about getting their work published will, very likely at some time, have it mailed back to them by return post. This may happen so many times they lose count. Sometimes it's just a post-it stuck to the work that tells you to politely fuck off. If you can't cope with the comments of pretend on-line people, then how the hell are you going to cope in the real world?
And if you're genuinely looking for solid, decent and fair critisism, don't post it here. Join a proper on-line writer's circle, or even one in the real world.
Rejection is part of writing, get used to it. I see people who post here in the same light as Fight Club recruits standing outside for three days and nights taking abuse. Character building.
And if you're not a writer? If you've just come up with a poem you want to share with the world?
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Originally Posted by white lily Can nobody give their oppinion with out making it personal? holy shit you would all fail anything related to debates. | I too am filing this statement away. That's totally priceless..
If you are in fact saying that we should give positive criticism with negative criticism, then yes, i do not respect that opinion in the slightest, because it's nonsensical. In order for it to make sense, I'd have to like every poem I read in at least one way, and I do not. At first, I was pissed off that you can't understand such a simple concept, but now, I just think it's like arguing about religion with one of those Bible-humping born again Christians; it's totally pointless, because they're completely out of their minds.
I don't care what you believe anymore; whatever it takes to keep you in Lala Land with your world peace, Sunday school and nuclear family is okay. All I have to say is that if you get on someone for not giving positive criticism, then we will most certainly have a problem on our hands. Due to your stance on such matters, and the fact that you are agreeing to disagree, you don't really have any place reprimanding anyone for their method of criticism, providing it isn't flat-out insulting. | |
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