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Poetry Challenge: Titles v2.1 - 02-01-05

So hey, have a case of writer's block? Need to get the words flowing again? This might be a place for you to start, and who know what it could lead to.

Here's the deal: Once each week I will post a title, and you take that title and write your poem in your style. The only rules, You have to have the title for that week, and keep it 20 lines or less. They'll be a lot easier for us to read, enjoy, critique, and offer ideas on.

So, add your own poem, comment on others, and enjoy.


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02-01-05

Title #1

Bottled Water For Dogs

(Might seem a bit off the wall, but see what you can do with it.)


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02-02-05

do we post our frankensteinian monstrosities here, then, when we finish?

(congrats, btw)


if I can make just nine people a day stare at me in abject horror and confusion... i think i've done my job.

there are only 10 kinds of people in the world: those that can read binary, and those that can't.

you know what? i still want a girl with a short skirt and a long jacket. (%)
  
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02-02-05

That's completely bizarre love, I'm not sure I can come up with anything vaguely coherent.


A golden energy
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I shed my evil skin
And found myself again

I was wrong, I don't mind
The impossible seems possible
This time I'm an electric wire
If the sun can radiate then so can I

  
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02-02-05

Yep Jarekk, go ahead and post 'em here. And yeah Sybs, I know it's strange, but that's the point. See if you can do it. I'm working on one as well. (I'll make the next title a wee bit more ordinary).


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02-02-05

Bottled Water for Dogs


Dry bone bone'd
heel humped high
caught unawares pretending
vaugely smiling shy
kitten cute and laughing
drinking from the bowl
bottled water for dogs
is not the only thing she stole...



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02-02-05

That's good Jobe. I'm not much for rhyme, but it was almost like a cute little limmerick. Good stuff, and I love reading what people come up with.


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02-02-05

thought for such a fun title it should have a funny little poem



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02-02-05

Bottled Water for Dogs

There was a man who had a dog
And fed him bottled water
D-I-N-G-O
D-I-N-G-O
D-I-N-G-O
And Dingo was his name-o!

There was a careless driver man
Who ran over poor Dingo
D-I-N-G-O
D-I-N-G-O
D-I-N-G-O
And no more bottled water...


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I shed my evil skin
And found myself again

I was wrong, I don't mind
The impossible seems possible
This time I'm an electric wire
If the sun can radiate then so can I

  
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02-02-05

hahahahahahaha



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02-02-05

lol, too much.


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02-02-05

I can't write seriously, I just sound pretentious because my nature is to make light of things.


A golden energy
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I shed my evil skin
And found myself again

I was wrong, I don't mind
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If the sun can radiate then so can I

  
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02-02-05

Bottled Water For Dogs

Sleeping, curled,
'Round yonder chair;
The lazy dog scratched
finding the water fair.

Sniffing fuzzy balls,
Tongue dry, parched;
Lapping a moist bowl
Toward groin now marched.



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02-02-05

hahahahaha.....that was fantastic SYBS


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just contemplating
the color of suicide
  
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hahahahaha.....that was fantastic SYBS
I'm glad ya liked it.


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Bottled Water For Dogs

Sleeping, curled,
'Round yonder chair;
The lazy dog scratched
finding the water fair.

Sniffing fuzzy balls,
Tongue dry, parched;
Lapping a moist bowl
Toward groin now marched.
Nice man... I love how everyone has just a slightly different take on the same words.


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02-07-05

Title #2
The Water is Rising


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02-07-05

swim inside my ocean
with each orgasmic wave
as you sink ever so deeper
into the abyss of bliss,
try to find the lost pearl
hidden within the wet clam,
it's a jewel for the taking...

and never mind the rise of the tide,
especially if it should rise in my eyes,
take it as sign that there is a surprise
which past ships sailed for too quickly;
without
a map,
blind
to the
bright stars,
forgetting
the right charts,
and dying
in the
pink sea
alone...

but i have faith in you,
so row, and row hard,
and plunge yourself into me
to discover what has yet to be found,
if all goes well you'll have a wonderful tale to tell
as long as you remember to come on the shore...


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02-08-05

The water is rising
I'm going to drown
The sewage is flowing
All over this town

Someone pass me a snorkel
Allow me to breathe
And sewage flows past me
There is no reprieve

I'm choking, I splutter
I've lost all my wit
Lifegiving water?
Load of bullshit.


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Title #3
Seeing Red


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