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02-18-05

Red be blood,
Red be fire
Red be heart
And heart's desire

Red be hate
Red be rage
Red be the Sun
At the end of days

Red be clay
Red be sand
And flushed red be
Clenched fist of the hand

Red be love
And red be war
And I don't wish to see
Red anymore


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02-18-05

hey goddamit,
pass the fuckin' joint,
don't bogart that shit,
take a hit and fly high
like a light kite in the sky...
just float in the smoke
like an easy rider that's tired,
passed out and about
in Yellow Springs, Ohio
where we're Oh so High, Oh,
as that love of above
tickles my thoughts...
So please,
think of the sinking red eyes
and remember to pass that shit to the left...



BONG!


I was masturbating
just contemplating
the color of suicide
  
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02-28-05

Title #4

The Last Reflex


Don't Drink and Park. Accidents cause people.


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03-01-05

Code:
Re-
(de-[moral LIES!]
   -em and re-[eel LIES!]
             -member,
              you are only the last)
-flex!


I was masturbating
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04-02-05

Well, I just got back here, good to see some familiar faces, although I was never on this forum long enough to really bond with anyone, I still have a shit-load of respect for a bunch of you guys...anyway, I'll give this a go...

Title #4

The Last Reflex

The fire, grasping, like a drunken mans flaming fists
Hit after hit, blast after blast, this volitile place
The bloody nose and the stinking mess
The final heartbeat, the last reflex

I stare into space, the walls fall, they crumble
Brick after brick, this dusty room around us
Stinging eyes, the last brick is gone
Home destroyed, a tsunami song

Final Reflex, under the rubble, last breaths
Your punctured lungs lay dead
Multiplying statistics on paper sheets
Crushed limbs and broken heads

Televise this beautiful grotesque
These cracked ribs and tortured children
These ruined homes, these Godless towns
These skulls and heroes underground



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04-07-05

Very cool man... thanks for coming by. Stick around will ya.


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04-07-05

Thanks alot hun, yeah, I'm trying to stick around more now, great to see a face I recognise, hope all is good with ya!



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The Final Reflex - 04-25-05

Well I don't know if I can match that last effort!


But here goes nothing:


Seize her!

Ectoplasmic spasm of a final orgasm
creates havoc with my inner thigh

Necrophile defiles the supple, as mile
piles upon retrogressive mile of leers
and languishing smiles whose bite is
a locked jaw of remorse: in a final

fatal reflex of an epileptic seizure
a feigned allusion to Caesar sinks
in synaesthetic splendor as knives
arrive, expected, like a surreal

psychadelic chorus in a Funkadelic
song, culling its crescendo from a
rococo riff of effervescent volume
and valor to culminate in a final reflex




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the devil's got the cue ball, the table's bein' run...
but God bless us all for playin'. God bless us every one.
  
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04-26-05

Lovely efforts put forth by EVERYONE.

Let's have a new one shall we?


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04-26-05

Title #5

Purple Hysteria


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04-26-05

lost drops of purple rain, like a Prince who was once sane,
such emotions best left in the caricatures of hysteria,
i remember the days of floods, clean water polluting dirty streets,
only the craziest of crazies ventured close enough for a swim,
and like memories of the present, only the richest peasant spoke cliches,
"time is but an ocean" he'd say...
i knew not of such truths, why does the universe include Whacky-Taffy?
these thoughts are terrible when towers tickle skies with corporate romance,
and in the end i've only wished one thing, to feel the pain of rain as it crashes down,
but what am i other than a blah, blah, blah?
so do not listen to me, it's best to just watch T.V.,
at least it makes sense to change channels during commercials...


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04-27-05

Blue chocolate
Yellow trees
Green insanity





Red innocence
Yellow youth
Orange humanity





Blue profanity
Red death
Purple hysteria





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04-30-05

Purple Hysteria

Lightened eyes, sleepwalking holiday eyes,
The sky bright and blue, yellow and red,
Where are the flowershops these days,
And the girls with daisies in their long swinging hair.

The tree branches shade us in the new age,
Free love between us, inside us,
Yellow and red, and purple, and grey,
The rainbow lights your eyes, the old fashioned way.

You scream, I run, forwards after you,
My heart fast and pounding, like our Monday sex before work,
You laugh, this hysteria has taken us away,
Like the time we met, San Diego, remember that day?

Nothing else to do, we lay under the sun,
Which is now becoming a moon as we stare,
Smoke fills our lungs, purple fills our eyes,
We wish away today, and remember our yesterdays.



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Where are the flowershops these days,
And the girls with daisies in their long swinging hair.
ooooh!!!!! i likes.....


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05-02-05

lol, thanks dude, gotta say...I dig your work, keep it up!



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Simply stated... - 05-03-05

you both pitch with a mighty mean forked tongue...

keep piling on the poesis.... I like it; I like it; I, like, it rules, man!



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but God bless us all for playin'. God bless us every one.

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Purple Hysteria - 05-03-05

Supple are the tendrils of the wisteria
whose winding shoots hang down over the
edge of Rob's stonewall fence into his pond.
On an outside chance that I might find him
facing the truth for once in his magic garden,
I brought my priest for an impromptu
confessional, quaint and homspun as an olive
branch offered up to a false god. But the idol
in his heart had not toppled, and still as an
ancient tombstone he faced the night in
solemn purple hysteria.



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but God bless us all for playin'. God bless us every one.

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05-03-05

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Yellow youth
Purple hysteria




I dig your ironic reversal of color!

Nicely done.



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05-06-05

purple hysteria
begginth quote forrgottel lore
of words kept secrt and unseen
dirty lil secret or two,
with no true mean.
fear outlasting comen sense and death knocks at your door
pointlesss at one occasion
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