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09-24-04

"infection affection"

a mass direction of hate disease,
breeds iniquity, infests the system...
broken down catalyst torments,
...my inferiority sleeps unforgiven
blessings of a hate-filled culture,
savages in their night-gown transgressions.
inevitable extremes, cold comfort,
solitude, and lost dreams...
is there no rest for the suffocated,
no time for educated seizures?
...dissonant rejection...
i stand alone.

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09-25-04

wow nice interpretation of the pic.


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twisted, distorted sound poem :) - 09-27-04

well, now it's a sound poem.....hehe

http://www.geocities.com/tnaylorj/in..._affection.mp3

did this in about 15-20 minutes tops about 15-20 minutes ago....you'll probably be quick to hear i'm not your average Christian

not really a "song", but works great for scaring pets, grandparents, and small children... heh
  
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09-27-04

sounds like it might be a good song. unfortunitly, all I hear is some parts of the background music and then the voice starts and it sounds like whispered static.


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10-08-04

Cool thread....i'm a chick btw. Not that it really matters but, I didn't want you to fall in love with me or anything before you knew,...haha



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10-09-04

lol I wasn't in any danger of that blackamyrlin. lol glad you found it here though.


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tweekers state of mind - 10-12-04

My friend was tweeked outa his mind. He just started scribbling and before he knew it there was a picture that emerged.
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he human heart feels things the eyes cannot see, and knows what the mind cannot understand.
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10-12-04

“tempered inner thing”

when you think everything's all right....
that's when it'll come alive.
innocent on the outside
clean around the edges..
no, it's the beast within that truly lives
you can't stop it,
nothing can stop it....
when those emotions takes over
and all he'll breaks lose
set free on animosity's pilgrimage
fired up and blind in the eyes...
you pricked your finger on pandora's box
and now's it too late...
this spilt milk has turned sour...
and you still wanted your mustache.
  
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10-13-04

stoned cast stone
mind exlpoded bone
chemical age messiah
virtual cross nailed higher
inhaled ring of thorn
crumbling liquid torn
falling to a devil low
with no more hits to go
three days cold...

...another jesus to the fold



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10-13-04

that's really good jobe....i like...
  
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10-13-04

thanks darkdemoness for posting a pic. if you could PM me next time though first that would be great.

great reads duke and jobe. wonderful interpretations of the pic.


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10-13-04

Quote:
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that's really good jobe....i like...
Thanks Duke & Lilly, for some reason it just reminded me of the Turin shroud...



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10-14-04

love the avi jobe, very cute. lol


anyways here is another one.


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10-14-04

umm trying that again.
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10-14-04

hmm that isn't working for me. I will try to post it again so you all can see it properly.


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10-15-04

lets try this one.
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10-15-04

Hmmm, think I'll pass on this one...



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10-18-04

why?


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Well I arrived late... hope I can be excused for doing Image #1 - 10-19-04

Here's my poem for Image #1.... better late than never, as they say:
(I hope you agree)


Jag the orbs
impink the punks...

peculiar are strife-torn

spunks whose silver

essence ties the trunks

of blood-worn

battle-wary

fruit-lipped soldiers

soddered on an ivied

bed of ivory colored

roses



and on the moon

swept easels of

an auburn rusted

night an energy

arises to once

again ignite

the salt spermatozoa

whose mission

is to taste of

the ovum

sacrosanct

amid the moist

pink cells of

flesh





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the devil's got the cue ball, the table's bein' run...
but God bless us all for playin'. God bless us every one.
  
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10-19-04

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"blooming villainy"

evil faces, victimizers....
they rape, they pillage
they'll steal your soul.
lost and innocent,
and yet you beg for more.
you'll cry for your forgiveness,
even beg them to stop,
but it only makes them stronger.
they'll fuck your morality with a steak knife...
to them - your integrity’s a four-course meal
no, nothing can stop them now
they've got your heart by it's veins
and your mind by the reins
do you really think can you save yourself now that no one cares?
...it's the beauty of self-destruction,
and baby, I’m blooming self-denial…
Duke E.
Dug the poem like a deep grave robber pillages a midnight tomb... and unlike Lily I say you're last lines a fitting tombstone for this macabre ditty to the spirits of no tone: blooming self-denial indeed--a thorny rosebush if ever one did bloom.



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