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Poetic Profanity. - 02-05-04

Is there a place for profanity in poetry, or does it totally turn you off?


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02-05-04

I think there can be a place for it. The poignantly place profane word is perfectly viable. Poems that go on and on with fuck this and fucking that don't really float my boat. I guess it sort of goes along with the saying, "there's a time and a place..."


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02-05-04

If you're creative, profanity can be a thing of beauty.

Why talk about a sunrise, when what's really splattered across the sky's tits is creamy white, and like light coming through something oily and slick.



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02-05-04

I've always been fine with it, but then I'm a big fan of Miller and Bukowski. Sometimes profanity can convey a brutality (of thought or action) that other words can't.

Alternatively it can strip a concept down to it's very bones, without the over-decorative phrasing which can blur the image.

It really depends on what you want to convey, I guess.



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02-20-04

my thoughts have already been expressed by the above posts. i agree that profanity can be a good thing if it is used properly. if used excessively and without real purpose, it just degrades the poetry.
  
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06-20-04

Profainity like anything else is beautiful in the hands of someone who is adept with language. But in the hands of a moron it's disgusting.


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07-12-04

well said.


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07-13-04

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07-13-04

I've never gone anywhere... You can find me, lingering in the background noise... (or the arcade.)


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07-14-04

lol ok


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07-27-04

I think that in SOME poetry there is a need for profanity of some kind....as long as it is used sparingly, and not on every other sentence. It gives other words and meanings a certain aggression or power, which is always vividly required in a poem for it to have a real connection with someone.

Thats what I think anyway!

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08-11-04

I seldom use it, because it's seldom needed. It's a cop-out for a lot of people.
  
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