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Divine Intervention - 06-08-06

Awaken
In a web like Hell
How did I reach this place
Why are they haunting me
I cannot look at God's face

Paralysing
Brilliant light
Trying to run
Want to scream, but cannot speak
I cannot look at God's face

Blind my eyes, I cannot see
What is being done to me
In my mind is only pain
All the memories are drained

Victimized
Specimen
Deathless torture
Void with no mercy
Black shroud blinds those who see

Violated
Naked before you I stand
Shattered shrine of flesh and bone
God's piercing through my soul

Segments of my life
Morbid pieces of reality
Twisted personality
Many faces yet faceless
Familiar things give way to strange
No mercy no reason just pain

Fatal
Sub-conscious control
Threshhold of pain unfolds
Transfixed martyr saving race
Who am I to judge thy grace

Awaken
In a web like Hell
How did I reach this place
Why are they haunting me
I cannot look at God's face

Blind my eyes, I cannot see
What is being done to me
In my mind is only pain
All the memories are drained

By Tom Araya


Here's the point - you're looking at affirmative action, and you're looking at marijuana. You legalize marijuana, no need for quotas, because really, who's gonna wanna work?

-Jon Stewart
  
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06-08-06

One of my fav songs. That and 213.



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06-12-06

Yeah, 213 is a good one.


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08-14-06

So is the guy, like, realizing his fallenness in the face of a vengeful god and, instead of finding redemption, left feeling violated?
  
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I never translated the song to have anything whatsoever to do with redemption. Just a man that's gone to hell.



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08-14-06

The protagonist doesn't mention it, but if the reader was expecting that the result of being laid bare before God would be redemption ("Lay me on an anvil, Oh God" [Donne, I think]), this guy would be saying that that wasn't his experience.
  
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