this for all you dark and violent poets
feel free to post your darkest thoughts in this thread

under skies stained of blood i lay myself to die
in such knowleg of my mistakes i ask why even try
for someone to make any impact is not likely for such as I
for i will now whither away under such blackened skies
for my life is a waste that has been riddled with hate
as such abuse in unspeakable ways causes my angst
to live my life in pain or to die throuh hatred is my fate
it seems it is such the mistress that i cannnot escape
so i will make the world pay for its wrong doing
and in such threats i hear demons hooting
in every thing i do i hear somebody booing
yet in my mind this is all of my doing
but i will massacre everyone in retribution for my pain
so i can sleep at night knowing life is not in vain
that there is a purpose for me to live once and again
killing in such a manner that everybody knows my name
i now am no longer the quiet kid that people thought i'd be
but someone who slughters the masses so effortlessly
this world paying for what its tenates have done to me
going off and muredering innocents ever so blatently

this is a great idea, but I'm going to move it to the smoke room so that other people will know they can vost their angry violent type poems here.

i smell the stench of sulfur overcome my nose
as the darkened flames rise up to swallow me
my only solice from this hell is tainted prose
demons seep out of the cracked granet to greet
all of the new residents of this forsaken place
out of such unholy dwelling we all will remain
then to my dismay i see lucifers grinning face
this is such a drastic change yet it is all the same
he tell me surrender let him take yhwe's place
i tell him no but he does not accept such defiance
so he overwhelms my mind and overtakes my body
in such mind body and soul an unholy triune alliance
my mildly mannered ways are gone now i am haughty
i do not like where i am wondering how to escape
but i live in a vast concrete cube with no air but flames
screaming out to yhwe so far removed this is my fate
so here i will wonder and stumble hanging my head in shame

sticky this will ya...

http://www.darkforum.com/showthread....67#post1240767
sticky this link will ya...
if you can...
if it good enough of an idea anyways

back to violent poetry

frustration with myself caused by my past mistakes
realizing that from the start it was myself that i hate
i want out of this hell the missing clarity i used to have
but now i know that that is in the long forgotten past
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Push To My Limit For The Last Time
Wanna See Just What I Can Take
You Must Be Out Of Your Mind
Thinking What I Feel Is So Fake
Pushing The Lead Into Your Skull
Feel The Hatred Overwhelming
The Blood From Your Head Pools
The Viens In My Head Begin Swelling

Try To Control What You Don't Know
Your Words And Deeds Make Me Primal
Only Looking Out For Your Own
Intrests As You Have Forsaken It All
I Promise You Won't Live To Change
As You've Had Chane And Chance Again
I've Come To Hate This Fucking Rage
Wondering Will I Escape This Pain

Chorus
Watching Your Viens Stop Pulsing
While The Life Fades From Your Eyes
Feeling The Old Familiar Culling
The Results Of Your Pointless Lies
Who Did You Think You Were Fooling
You Just Wanted To Fuck Someone Else
I Feel My Darkened Heart Cooling
As You'e Put Me Through Personal Hell
Chorus End

Stop Screaming It Will Be Over Soon
Your Manipulation Will End Today
I Invested All This Time In You
And For What For You To Betray

You Lay Dying Skull Split Wide Open
It Feels Euphoric To See It End
You've Payed For The Personal Sins
Feeling Death And Joy Now Blend
I Will Work To Keep You Alive
Long Enough To Watch You Die
Your Dim Light Will Not Revive
Seeing Blood Drip From Your Eyes

There You Go Again Try To Take Control
I Really Hated Being Taken For A Fool
Just Go Away
So Who's Laughing Now You Fucking Bitch
Your The Reason That I Flipped My Wig
You're To Blame

Repeat Chorus

I Can Only Be Pushed So Far
Sadly You Didn't Learn In Time
Leaving Me With The Cursed Scar
A Side Of Me I Didn't Wanna Find

someone besides just me post on this thread

post. some good stuff ya got goin' up in here.

it always nice to be appreciated