If I wrote that, I'd kill myself too.

EL

hey did you know I made god suck my cock
man he needs to shave

But there is no god.

*smacks firewall* shouldn't you be all....um....refusing downloads or sumtin'

anywho.....yeah, i agree with Quiet....

i personally think this is decieving....i doubt this persons crediability.....i mean, c'mon: Hi! I'm new! Here's a poem! It's from my "late" friend.......

but whatever....i ain't here to be a prick (well, not an erect one....more like a limp one).....the point is, whether or not said poem was or was not written by the dearly departed of this individual who has a fascination with the letter Z has no effect on my judement whatsoever on this QUOTE-UN-QUOTE so-called poem......

to put it simple, the poem is mediocre, too uber teeny-gothic and quite trite:

UGH!!!!! like that's not a line you've read a million times before in TEEN-GOTH WEEKLY THIS ISSUE: BLACK, THE NEW FASHION! AND CRIMSON WRIST RIVERS, THE SILENT KILLER!

anywho.....yes i'm being satirical and judgemental and maybe even a prick, but i'm sayin' what the majority of us are thinking......

I think the poem is crap... What is the point in being critical when your friend is already dead? Its a little late to tell your freind s/he should actually write some decent poetry.

So really there was no point in posting it on here.....

I'm sorry man, I am not flaming or anything, I am just bringing this to Razzzzzen's attention, or whatever his/her username is that I can't see because I can't be arsed to scroll up.
I can't say this anymore subtly than I am gonna say it....

Your friend sucked at poetry....

Also a few questions.

Your late friends family let you have his/her suicide note or did s/he write it to you? How in bejebus's name did you get hole of it in the first place? And really, I honestly find it doubtful that your late friend would write this kakka as a suicide note, I mean, usually they address their families first and give reasons on why they are attempting/comitting suicide and really, how they feel spills out on paper the goodbyes, why they are doing it and what they want done with their bodies and belongings.

In short... I think this is a crock of shit.... I don't think you have a late lameass friend that died. I think you are doing this for attention.

I have to stress to you, I am not flaming, it is opinon and I'm genuinely curious.

w3rd.....*gives Lenz a cookie*

yeah, really. in fact, i suggest we dig up this "late friend" and kick him/her square in the skull. maybe that'll knock some sense into em' in the next life to write better poetry.

besides, who the hell posts "sympathy poetry" on DARKFORUM of all places??

go to puppydogs.com if you want cute little "awwww! so sad!" replies...

this place gets shitE poetry because we encourage shitty poets to keep coming. we all need to grow some balls and start setting some standards to this place. jesus-fuck-me-to-second base-twice-christ...!

this isn't flaming either. not when EVERYONE who actually gives a rats ass about this section of the forum all agree with me. i'm just one of the few that don't care to spare some dumbasses' feelings over the cost of degrading this section of the forum...

and this is NOT a matter of taste. and this is not me being overly conservative. i assure you that. this is me recognizing how ridiculous this so called "artist" section of the board really looks. this isn't poetry. it's a fucking joke.

by the way, if anyone wants to delete this post, at least have the decency to move my post to the Bitch Board. The reason why I didn't post it there is because I don't think that it belongs there. This post is about poetry and art. Not about being a bitch.

which sorta gives us the real history of this guys' sex life.. or lack to point it out clearly..

you bitch

All merged.... thread in poetry moved here and merged.... if you want to flood our forums have a ball in bitch.... but I will not take your shit outside this forum.....

easy as pie

Weeeee!!!

fair enough. what kinda pie?

Shite I'm bored,...

pussy pie My personal favorite..... mmmmm.... tastes like tuna quiche

How many of you people skipped over this post? Let me sum up: this poem was a total joke, written to suck on purpose. It's supposed to be terrible, much like all the useless goth poetry we get here. Get it? It doesn't even need to be critiqued, because it wasn't serious. It'd be like if I took a picture of a dead opossum's asshole, and submitted it for photograph of the month. Jokes? Granted, it's a total cliche that's been done before, but it makes me cringe when people actually analyze it.

i dissagree. i think it's the best poem... evar.

I was gonna post a picture of my tits here and say ANALIZE THAT! But I thought there was no rellivence in it so I'm just gonna say BOLLOCKS! because I can as I am english and it sounds better when an english person says bollocks.