der de le me what they say hey........i can't read!!!!!! or write!!!!!!!! ahh!!!!!!

hey look, it's poetry!

well shit, if it was that simple why did you keep beating on the keyboard the first time.

aderol and coffee.....wooo!

need to add some beam in for good measure.

I REALLY THINK BILLY THE KID IS A MORON.
Why?: you know shit about Poetry forum if you say we got no good poems there because there are words that are beyond your nule intelligence.
WE DO NOT WANT U THERE AND THIS THREAD WILL LAST THE SAME TIME YOU WILL LAST IN THIS DARKFORUM, i tell you, and then you can learn how to say things. It's really easy to laugh about things that other people do (i do not care if they are bad or good) whilst U do NOTHING.
No more to be said.
I won't care about your opinions.
Over.

I'm sure that would just lead to more bad poems.

And you, who can't even form coherent thoughts, or spell "you" properly, shut up. Billy noted that he does write his own poetry.

"For every good poem out there there are an infinite amount of real shitty ones that drip with unintelligent bile."

Some obscure piece of shit said that..... and he was about right.....

I have written crap myself.... and if and when people tell em it is crap I nod my head knowingly and say...."yep.... that was a piece of shit.... here you want to wipe your ass with it...."

in essence you have to take the good with the bad.... sometimes the real bad..... and if you are a writer get used to not everyone fawning over your crap like you are the king of prose..... you may as well say that your shit smells of roses and lavender..... when we all know that shit stinks... well.... like shit....

so get over it.... write more if you feel the need..... but do not expect everyone to post-----

OMG!!!! that waz da shiznit!!@!!

cuz it ain't happening.....

Also.... a quick note to those who do not frequent the Bitch Board..... this is a hostile atmosphere here.... if you came here expecting the worst.... expect even worse than that....

Personally, I have been writing poetry since I was in about fourth grade. I'd write about topics such as bagels, and clowns, and how much I hated my brother. I still have all my old poetry from during that time, and even though its humiliating its wonderful to see how I've evolved as a writer.

Now, honestly, I used to post in the Poetry Forum all the time. Thats the main thing which attracted me to dark forum. However, it began to upset me when all I recieved were compliments, and no one ever offered me any critisism. It also seemed more like a popularity contest, than anything else. I think all poetry is beautiful, anything which inspires a person to write, whether its the feeling of sadness, or anguish is beautiful as well.

But I do think its also beautiful when somebody else can offer you critisism and true feedback, about how they feel about your poetry. Honestly, I don't think billy intentionally targeted anybody specifically to rank on, he was just expressing his opinions. Sure, I think he should have done it differently, but jesus, he's italian, anyways, one must keep in mind this is the bitch board. So get over it.

1. I said it because I agree with it, not because I think it's universally true.
2. Have you noticed that pretty much nobody likes you?
3. This is the bitch board. If you don't like it, go cry in the friendship board.

1.i noticed your first post was nice but u never know..i'm always defending myself..sorry
2.people here might not like me,but i don't know shit about them and they don't know me so...
3.it's not because it's the bitch board i can't post my opinion, u can to i'm not gonna stop u

blind asshole, ofcourse he doesn't, and if he does it'd be ever worse than mine..
i don't understand why i was upset u people are soooo boring

"I REALLY THINK BILLY THE KID IS A MORON.
Why?: you know shit about Poetry forum if you say we got no good poems there because there are words that are beyond your nule intelligence."

Uhh, i dont usually find words in the poetry section i will not understand... in fact its all too easy to understand, simplistic really. THe lugumbrious attemps youve made to relegate my intellect to the back of the bus have been grievous and sad in nature... perhaps you should learn to shut your cake hole because people with a brain will always smite your dumbass. By the way ive tossed in a few "big" words for you to go look up in there.

"WE DO NOT WANT U THERE AND THIS THREAD WILL LAST THE SAME TIME YOU WILL LAST IN THIS DARKFORUM, i tell you, and then you can learn how to say things. It's really easy to laugh about things that other people do (i do not care if they are bad or good) whilst U do NOTHING.
No more to be said.
I won't care about your opinions.
Over."

With the exception of Antihero, ive been here the longest. So youre telling me this thread wont die out for another 3 years? Also when you claim not to care about my opinions you shouldnt take so much offense to them, it gives away the fact that youre a sniveling pretten cunt hair without a shred of talent who gets mad when people put your (and rightly so) shitty poetry down.. maybe you should just follow tote and tune of your poems and kill yourself before you suffer anymore embarassment. over.

Italians are EEEVVVVVVVVVVIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIILLLLLLLLLLLL!

no actuallly i do, i just dont post every piece of shit sentence i can thin f here expecting to be treated like the king of poetry... by the by my poems are vastly superior to yours. ill have to dig one out for you.

Ok, count me out.
Too absurd and free words to get in this.

Offensive atmosphere huh? ok, Suck my cock italian.

I didn't know about the use of this subforum.
Sorry for that. If it is to bitch people I should come here more often and tell some truths.
The rest, I don't sorry.
One poet that says his poetry is superior... well, you win, your poetry is superior, you are more intelligent, and you rule man!.

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