[crimsonnyte]

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[>FuckDoll<]

Originally Posted by Jordyn

oh, in a sexual way, i perceived it as suggesting a person was only half a member...i suppose that wouldn't make any man...too entertaining.

unless it was the good half.

[Wicked Lady]

Oh it was way entertaining. Trust me.

[Duchess Nocturn]

When I first starting posting here, I'd just turned 17. I flirted and *snogged* or whatever the hell else. I think it's silly & stupid, now, but I have done things of which I am not proud. Oh yes. I have done things of which I am not proud.

But posting unflattering pictures I can't bring myself to do . . . . . even good pictures I eventually see as horrible. I'm so critical of myself . . . . and the kind of people who are attracted to me-- I can only think of one who didn't have anything horribly terribly wrong with him. The men who respond to me? Most of them are old, foreign, homeless, old foreign & homeless, or if they're not any of those, they always lack something like ambition, self control, sanity . . . . or teeth.

[Duke E.]

Originally Posted by Duchess Nocturn

When I first starting posting here, I'd just turned 17. I flirted and *snogged* or whatever the hell else. I think it's silly & stupid, now, but I have done things of which I am not proud. Oh yes. I have done things of which I am not proud.

But posting unflattering pictures I can't bring myself to do . . . . . even good pictures I eventually see as horrible. I'm so critical of myself . . . . and the kind of people who are attracted to me-- I can only think of one who didn't have anything horribly terribly wrong with him. The men who respond to me? Most of them are old, foreign, homeless, old foreign & homeless, or if they're not any of those, they always lack something like ambition, self control, sanity . . . . or teeth.

Did you ever think you had anything terribly wrong with you (self control, sanity, etc.)? It gets me how you run around here calling me a fucking lunatic when you're least just as crazy as I am. Jeez, when I met you, you kept one of your mom's steak knifes under your pillow so you could cut yourself, you liked to speak and write in third person pretending to be possessed, and you were completely asexual - and when you gained interest in sexual intercourse you wanted me to use you in a way that made feel like a tramp or slut. Or what about the time when in you were in a depressed tantrum at your Christian college, you shaved off your eyebrows for attention? Doesn't sounds very sane to me......but I loved you anyway (I knew we were both fucking nuts). What about all those times you would go into a violent, moody, or verbally abusive rage out of NOWHERE? 9 times out of 10 it's what made me go into my rages, that or the fact you seemed to care about anything.... I guess the point is I never had to deal with someone before that was just as fucked up as I am - still I even miss that too to all hell...

....I really think sanity is just an illusion of the mind.

It doesn't justify anything that I did in ANYWAY, and if I had the chance I would make sure I wouldn't make the same mistakes.... just it really bothers me how YOU are the one with a selective memory and YOU are the one pretending to a perfect little saint and you make such claims about me.....

[(antihero)]

Originally Posted by Duke E.

Did you ever think you had anything terribly wrong with you (self control, sanity, etc.)? It gets me how you run around here calling me a fucking lunatic when you're least just as crazy as I am. Jeez, when I met you, you kept one of your mom's steak knifes under your pillow so you could cut yourself, you liked to speak and write in third person pretending to be possessed, and you were completely asexual - and when you gained interest in sexual intercourse you wanted me to use you in a way that made feel like a tramp or slut. Or what about the time when in you were in a depressed tantrum at your Christian college, you shaved off your eyebrows for attention? Doesn't sounds very sane to me......but I loved you anyway (I knew we were both fucking nuts). What about all those times you would go into a violent, moody, or verbally abusive rage out of NOWHERE? 9 times out of 10 it's what made me go into my rages, that or the fact you seemed to care about anything.... I guess the point is I never had to deal with someone before that was just as fucked up as I am - still I even miss that too to all hell...

....I really think sanity is just an illusion of the mind.

It doesn't justify anything that I did in ANYWAY, and if I had the chance I would make sure I wouldn't make the same mistakes.... just it really bothers me how YOU are the one with a selective memory and YOU are the one pretending to a perfect little saint and you make such claims about me.....

We're not talking about how you fucked up your marriage here, Dookie. We're talking about something completely unrelated. Save it for your shitty song lyrics.

Oh, and way to be mature. I love it when people speak of things best kept private on a public forum.

[Duke E.]

Originally Posted by (antihero)

Oh, and way to be mature. I love it when people speak of things best kept private on a public forum.

So do I.....if wasn't for private shit she said - and in repeated posts, I would have kept my mouth shut...

[Duke E.]

oh.....those shitty song lyrics.....she wrote the chorus lyrics ironically more than a year ago for that one song...

...besides, where' your music? where's anything slighly artistic you've done?

[(antihero)]

Originally Posted by Duke E.

where's anything slighly artistic you've done?

http://www.sometimesi.com

Right there.

And I've actually never read any of your song lyrics. I just threw that in there to make you look worse. My apologies *hugzzzzz*

[Duke E.]

you write shitty free verse poetry and keep pointless, vain, web logs and you what to make cracks on lyrics of mine you haven't even read? um.....

[(antihero)]

Originally Posted by Duke E.

you write shitty free verse poetry and keep pointless, vain, web logs and you what to make cracks on lyrics of mine you haven't even read? um.....

funny, because i doubt you know much about poetry, aside from Poe and what you carve into your arms with a butter knife. most people who write song lyrics aren't very literary. and how can web logs be vain? isn't the point of a journal to talk about yourself? i could talk about you, if you want, but that kinda defeats the point of having one. it's pointless for you because i hate you and you don't like me either; it'd be like if I gave a damn about anything you had to say. That wouldn't make sense. my guess is that this post of yours is just a lame attempt at a comeback. You should read the Old Testament more; God'll teach ya how to get revenge.

and, i did read your lyrics just now. and i almost vomited in my mouth. stick to writing instrumentals and/or rotting in Hell.


P.S. it's blank verse, not free verse.

[Duke E.]

... your poetry isn't very POETIC. You ever heard of rhyme, rhythm, or meter - it helps ALOT?
...plus I expect my lyrics is still out on their own too well.....pitch, musical rhythm and timbre often makes even shitty poetry alot more interesting - least for me anyway

http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/tg...21567?v=glance

....like 110 on the goth/industrial charts (not bad considering there are THOUSANDS of shitty mp3s just mine on there, and I am ahead of couple well known industrial artists). I don't think I am brilliant or even that decent....but I think even my lyrics by themselves are better than free verse poetry.......

[Duke E.]

Originally Posted by (antihero)

P.S. it's blank verse, not free verse.

...whatever it is, it's nothing more a scribble of thoughts as far as I am concerned......I don't consider it poetic at all

I tend not to call the sound of a broken air conditioner music either (though I bet I could find a way to make something musical out of it)......

[(antihero)]

Originally Posted by Duke E.

... your poetry isn't very POETIC. You ever heard of rhyme, rhythm, or meter - it helps ALOT?

That right there proves PERFECTLY that you aren't a writer, and don't know anything about modern writing, or poetic movements in general. You should tell sixxx(sic)six the same thing, and see what he says; he'll laugh you right into your grave. Hell, tell that to any writer. Do you hate Picasso because his later work doesn't resemble REAL people and REAL places? Do you hate bands that experiment with odd time-signatures and non-rhyming lyrics? Pull your head out of your ass and show me you're an artist, Dookie.

Poetry is not song lyrics. It is not structure. Sure, classical poetry is, but that isn't what most people write nowadays. Go to places like www.sidereality.com or www.canwehaveourballback.com, and learn. Showing me that you lack creativity doesn't make me want to think that you write good song lyrics

[(antihero)]

Originally Posted by Duke E.

...whatever it is, it's nothing more a scribble of thoughts as far as I am concerned......I don't consider it poetic at all

I tend not to call the sound of a broken air conditioner music either (though I bet I could find a way to make something musical out of it)......

Poetry is experimenting with language, not making sure your lines have the same number of syllables. You're a cliche, dude..... you're every English professor's nightmare.

[>FuckDoll<]

Originally Posted by Duke E.

... your poetry isn't very POETIC. You ever heard of rhyme, rhythm, or meter - it helps ALOT?

BwahahahhaHahahaHAHAahahaaaaaaa, vomit.

[Duke E.]

Originally Posted by (antihero)

That right there proves PERFECTLY that you aren't a writer, and don't know anything about modern writing, or poetic movements in general. You should tell sixxx(sic)six the same thing, and see what he says; he'll laugh you right into your grave. Hell, tell that to any writer. Do you hate Picasso because his later work doesn't resemble REAL people and REAL places? Do you hate bands that experiment with odd time-signatures and non-rhyming lyrics? Pull your head out of your ass and show me you're an artist, Dookie.

Poetry is not song lyrics. It is not structure. Sure, classical poetry is, but that isn't what most people write nowadays. Go to places like www.sidereality.com or www.canwehaveourballback.com, and learn. Showing me that you lack creativity doesn't make me want to think that you write good song lyrics

I don't have anything against modern writing...... I'm just saying the shit you write isn't poetry as far as I am concerned....

actually most of the lyrics I write or listen to don't rhyme, and I love odd time signatures (6/8, 12/8, mixed meters, etc.)....

there's a point where one is being experimental or avant garde, there's another one when it comes so much so it loses it's artistic quality......

...there is a difference between rambling and poetry - sorry. if you think not, main as well call EVERYTHING on this wretched forum poetry....

you can call it whatever else....but I don't see it as poetry....

[Duke E.]

Originally Posted by (antihero)

Poetry is experimenting with language, not making sure your lines have the same number of syllables. You're a cliche, dude..... you're every English professor's nightmare.

Pretty funny, you sound like a cliche to me...... explaining a lack of creativity as your way being avant garde - how many God awful times have I seen this done?

[(antihero)]

Originally Posted by Duke E.

Pretty funny, you sound like a cliche to me...... explaining a lack of creativity as your way being avant garde - how many God awful times have I seen this done?

has nothing to do with snooty art kids who call themselves avant-garde. has everything to do with people who aren't repeating what's already there. How did I say that my way of explaining anything was me calling myself avant garde? I think that's what you wanted me to say. What about your music? does it sound like anything I've heard before?

and the fact that you require rhyme, meter, etc. is completely lame. You said it yourself, so don't give any shit about you having not said that.

[(antihero)]

Originally Posted by Duke E.

I don't have anything against modern writing...... I'm just saying the shit you write isn't poetry as far as I am concerned....

actually most of the lyrics I write or listen to don't rhyme, and I love odd time signatures (6/8, 12/8, mixed meters, etc.)....

there's a point where one is being experimental or avant garde, there's another one when it comes so much so it loses it's artistic quality......

...there is a difference between rambling and poetry - sorry. if you think not, main as well call EVERYTHING on this wretched forum poetry....

you can call it whatever else....but I don't see it as poetry....

all depends on what you think poetry is. you seem to think that poetry is somehow fixed. that sucks. if music was fixed, then most of the bands i listen to probably wouldn't exist...