ok.... i want to get some of my songs out of the poetry section..and get some musical feedback on them... theres no real tune to any of these..cause i' can't record anything to upload *and i can't sing for shit* but...if you think of sound..just lemme know!!


~~~~~~AnD tO sTaRt ThInGs OfF!~~~~~~~~~~~
~(*Before The Walls Fell Down)*~
We watched the sunset
Hand in hand
Before the walls came down
We watched the moon rise
In the sand
Before the walls fell down
We found eachother
Two lost souls
All before the walls
The world still spun
We were one
All before the walls
Green grass
And silver trees
The butterflies
Bring me to my knees....
The roses sweet
Melody comes clear
But it was all
Before the walls fell down....
I remember you
The way you smiled
How you held me in the storm
While the walls came down
Around us stones rained
Brutal drops of war and hate
But your arms stayed strong
All while the walls fell down
We sat in silence
Bittersweet...
Hollow words, never meet
As the walls crashed down
I watched your face
The tears rained down
Killing me as they splashed in twos
All the while, the walls fell down
Green grass
And silver trees
The butterflies
Bring me to my knees....
The roses sweet
Melody comes clear
But it was all
Before the walls fell down....
The fields are empty
No walls seperate
What once was good
From what once was hate
And we all think back to times
Before the walls came down
The tastes we knew
Back in the times
When we were all innocent
Are just distant memories
Of days gone by...
But then the walls came down
I can't find you...
You disappeared
Never to be seen
Never near
You hold me no more
Because I tore the walls down
Shunned and scorned
Outcast in my own life
Wreckage everywhere
All my fault
But I couldn't help it..
I couldn't breathe...
So all the walls came down...