Have you ever felt the pain,
That excrutiating pain,
That stabs right through your heart,
And then goes right for your brain.
The kind that doesnt give in,
Because you are the evil sin.
The sin that goes through life,
Fu(king things up.
The sin that lives in strife,
Fu(king things up.
The sin that is immortal,
and can not be slain.
The sin that lives in you,
And feeds on your pain.
That sin is I,
I thrive on your hate.
That sin is I,
I thrive on your pain.
That sin is I,
and i hunger for more.
That sin is I,
and have no concept of what life is for,
any more.
Have you ever felt a love.
That wonderful love,
You knew to be so true.
Then it comes back,
And stabs,and laughs at you.
And it rips away at your bones,
But you are left with nothing to do.
And it rips away at your life,
But you are left to die.
And it rips away at your soul,
But you are left to cry.
Left tocry,
Left to die,
They laugh at you,
And you have nothing that you,
Can do.
Have you ever felt agony,
Agony that was so sweet.
The pain was delicious,
And the sins were discreet.
Welcome to my life,
Miles away from sane.
Welcome to my life,
That i have lived all in vain.

i think it'd be a better song.

a goood song!

Anyone else?

I agree, definately a song.

I really liked the song/poem, and I think it could be either, if you want it to be a poem instead of a song or vise versa, it's yours, and who really should give a fuck about what other people say?!?!

as long as you like it 8)