poetry thread...LILYWHITEMM (deleted posts) - Darkforum.com - Dark Stories, Dark Art, Poetry, Photography, Debates and Discussions

errantrogue · 08-31-05

not that i'm post stalking, but since you don't want me to post up there, i figured i post down here...

i just don't get what you mean by presentation and usage NOT being important... poetry is ALL about presentation... it's a written medium where presentation is a tool to convey the art.

look, i like you first, second, and fourth stanzas... sure there's a few items in those that seem awkward, but not as much as in stanze three.

anyways... i've read and REread this poem and i STILL can't get the commercial out of my head.

harli · 08-31-05

FUCK OFF ERRANTROGUE! youve already expressed your feelings on this to me MANY times! stop being childish and drop it already!

MY poem.

MY thoughts.

i write because i LIKE TO. not for your approval!

errantrogue · 08-31-05

easy, lily... it's called criticism.

harli · 08-31-05

i didnt ask you to follow me around and point out flaws in my poems when you already CLEARLY know its aggravating me!

knock it off.

harli · 08-31-05

if you have a problem, PM me and we will discuss it. i dont appreciate you cluttering up MY personal poetry thread with foolishness! delete your posts in here so i can return my thread back to normal.

errantrogue · 09-01-05

oh WTF, FD... this is criticism! she doesn't HAVE to like it... she doesn't even have to READ it... but it shouldn't be deleted just because did and didn't...

>FuckDoll< · 09-01-05

It's not criticism errant. It's bickering and harassment. She told you to stop before these posts were made. And you went on, and on. Lily requested they be deleted from her thread. She has every right to do so.

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