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Critique my work... - 03-20-05

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A reworked piece not seen before...




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03-20-05

Might i ask why the red ones looks so brown?


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Because they are not originally red....



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Drown...





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03-20-05

I really like that last one. The title made me smile. Was it staged or did you find it?


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03-20-05

I read Chase, thought of my brother...yea I think that suits him. I'm the cup in the lead because I'm trying to get away from him (quite an annoying 9 year old).

I still love the roses, I like the purpley-bluey ish color thing...ishk.

That middle one makes me go cross eye >.< like that. umm, think it's the darkness around it or sumtin, it seems a little surreal. I dunno...golly I always hating writing art critiques
  
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I really like that last one. The title made me smile. Was it staged or did you find it?

Found it, it was a test shot while changing the settings on the camera...

And thanks Crim, sorry I made your eyes go



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03-20-05

So they weren't red originally... what color were they???

And this one... Doesn't this look like a human type figure??

Nice pic actually...
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03-21-05

Dark you are so strange.

I love the pics Paul. Love the past one...Its really different. But in a good way! They are all awesome tho...like always!
  
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03-21-05

Lol Dark you saw that too.... makes ya think doesn't it

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So they weren't red originally... what color were they???
Orange or pink.

I'd say orange.
  
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Our survey says..... nuh urh!!! They where actually a kind of purple color....



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I still have that one version of the flowers as my desktop
  
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03-22-05

Some pics I took yesterday while walking to one of the locations with Kathryn, I think they came up pretty well after I worked on them. They also make a refreshing change from my normal stuff...





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so that one duck was in Deer-in-the-headlights mode? didn't seem to have moved once the mallard swam off.


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03-22-05

Aww woot!! Cute cute!
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03-22-05

Nice one of the ducks.. Now Thats how to hunt folks!!!!!


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so that one duck was in Deer-in-the-headlights mode? didn't seem to have moved once the mallard swam off.

Yeah it was kinda weird, it just sat there for ages...


...but they other one didn't swim that far away thou



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