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not what it seems *violent subject matter*
Published by Jordyn
01-22-03
not what it seems *violent subject matter*

His hand rough against her head.
hair tightly pulled and pinching.
She squirms feeling a fish cold,
rough hand slide up along her flesh,
beneath the warm clothing.

She screams hearing the rip,
she closes her eyes and prays,
as her clothes are tossed to the ground.
he smiles, keeping her panties,
he smells them,
shoving the hard into her mouth.
"Do that again and i'll kill you bitch"
the cold sharp steel bites her skin.
The gleem catches in her tear filled eyes.

Goosebumps prickle,
moisture starts to trickle.
His fingers wriggling inside.
She moans, her body
betrays her, as her passion rises.

He smacks her, hard.
The sharp snap as her neck swings
to the side. Her head smashes against
wet, musty brick.
"It's not for your pleasure pet"
The dark chuckle and hateful eyes.
Piercing her soul, she shivers.

He lifts her arms up and she sighs,
she feels the tingly rush of blood.
He throws her to the floor.
She tries to squirm away, her hands
bound still by the heavy, chunky chain.

With a gag she's jerked back,
gasping for breath.
"How like you the gift?"
His voice is spiteful
"I've always liked the choke collars,
they really are the best for keeping
dogs under control."

She hears his footsteps fall hard and slow.
She glances up to look at him, he bends down.
Again he grabs her up by the hair.
she sniffles as the pain tenses her neck.
"Did i say you could look at me?"
the mocking question sends fear
her body sends a signal to flee.

"I like you still have spunk,
but that must go soon."
He smacks her again.
She tastes blood in her mouth.
He leans close and licks it,
"mmmm..sweet"
He bends down as if to kiss her.
The pain of his bite on her sore lip
explodes through her body.
Tears fall freely now.

He throws her to the wall.
Her body crumples with the thump.
He strides over and rolls her to her back.
She closes her eyes as she hears his zipper.
"spread them or i will"
his commands leave no arguemnent.

He thrusts cruely, hotly and painfully.
She screams out into the panties.
Blood soaked through and she continues to cry.

He explodes with a groan, she feels him
spill out. He licks her cheek and walks away.
She feels the draft of the door open,
and a chill breeze as it clicks shut.

She lays there for an eternity,
silence making her head explode.
She then hears the door open again.
It's him, but he's different.

"How's the game hun"
She opens her eyes to the soft candlelight.
He rushes over to remove the panties.
Kissing away her pain quickly.

"are you okay love?"
his familiar face and warm smile
is there.
She nods as he helps her up.
Swinging her to his arms.
She rests against his chest.
Fuzzy and soft, they walk to the door.
Up the steps to their candlelit bedroom.

She's carried to the tub.
Lavender bubbles, her favorite,
He places her in and grabbing
the rag lathers up.

"So my queen, what's your command?"
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01-22-03

yeah my poetry sucks, but i like the imagery



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wow very interesting indeed, kinda threw me off, but i like it
  
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01-23-03

i guess it reflects my passion for roleplaying...



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01-23-03

Well then, i guess thats one of the reasons i find you so interesting
  
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01-23-03

Thats great jordyn *wipes away her drool* I absolutely love the imagery!



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01-24-03

oo i like it.... definately like it. nice jordyn


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01-27-03

thank you, thank you, and another thank you



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01-27-03

nice work Jordyn *ponders*


A human being should be able to change a diaper, plan an invasion, butcher a hog, con a ship, design a building, write a sonnet, balance accounts, build a wall, set a bone, comfort the dying, take orders, give orders, cooperate, act alone, solve equations, analyze a new problem, pitch manure, program a computer, cook a tasty meal, fight efficiently, die gallantly.
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01-27-03

*takes an exaggerated bow flashing a lot of cleavage*



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01-28-03

~drools at the cleavage~
hehe j/k

very good stuff, Jordyn


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Beautiful.
  
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02-07-03

MMmmmmm..... Cleavage.....


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wonderful i love the twist at the end!!!



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04-27-03

I would just like to say, that poem reminded me of a book I read once... about this guy who's written an array of child abuse novels, his name is David Pelzer...

I read one about him where his mother would beat him, attempt to kill him, make his eat his baby brothers shit straight from the diaper... etc etc... and one day, she acted like nothing happened and gave him a great home and everything... until about a week later, it started all over again... It was almost too good to be true.



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