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StoriesDiscuss i love you in the The Pen forums; She always loved bones. Human bones, that is.
Touching them, feeling them on her body.
Rib cage bones, hip bones, arm bones, face bones...
Long, hard and beautiful in shape.
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She always loved bones. Human bones, that is.
Touching them, feeling them on her body.
Rib cage bones, hip bones, arm bones, face bones...
Long, hard and beautiful in shape.
It wasnt so difficult for ther to find them!
After all, she had her man!
Oh how she loved his bones. Under this thin layer of pale skin that covered them.
He was so soft to touch and his bones so perfectly hard to feel.
As years were passing by, his body was becoming thinner and his bones more
lovable for her...
Until his rib cage became her sanctuary.
Ashes to ashes and dust to dust.... Her love for him turned to lust...
Eternal lust.
After all, she was his doll and his casket...
was her home.
Most poems don't use artificial rhyming, good poems should rhyme only naturally, as in rarely would they rhyme and it would be on accident. That way the wording is not limited to a certain number of words, therefore true, but it does lack the rhythm of a poem.
Most poems don't use artificial rhyming, good poems should rhyme only naturally, as in rarely would they rhyme and it would be on accident. That way the wording is not limited to a certain number of words, therefore true, but it does lack the rhythm of a poem.
then its simply a short story. right? its just that i write poems as well so at times i might do that "rhyming" thing by accident in my stories.. so yeah here ya go.
I really like it! Up until the ashes to ashes part. I'm not too keen on the ending. i thought it would have been more powerful with a different conclusion.
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