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An Eroding Fear
Published by Lord Amideaus
11-19-06
An Eroding Fear

Introducion:

"Go deep Jonny!" called Bill as he threw the small football the boys were playing with toward the boy running down the sideline of the almost un-usuable football field. He knew he had it he told himself, he just knew it. He was going to score the winning touchdown, and all the kids would love him. And as soon as those thoughts had entered his mind, they left just as fast. Slowly, he watched as the ball landed inches from his fingers as he fell to the ground. Sitting up, Jonny noticed something strange sticking out of the ground. It was a pointed piece of rock, sticking from the ground upward, almost as if it were the corner of a box.

"Hey guys come look at this!" he called to his friends as they ran over to make sure he was ok.

As the boys came running over, Jonny noticed that the rock was moving very slitly, and he put his hand on top of to find that it was shaking. Faster and faster, the rock began to tremble, and after only mear seconds could Jonny leave his hand there before his entire arm was shaking violently.

Finnally, the rock fell from its place, leaving a small hole in the ground. As the boys arrived, they asked Jonny what happened.

"Jonny come on man you gota make those catches!" said Bill in a somewhat agrivated voice.
"Jonny...Jonny! HELLO!?" Bill called, but he couldnt hear Bill.

As he stared into the hole, all Jonny could see was the dark. It began to spread farther onto the grass, as though it were alive. He couldn't take his eyes off it, as if it was hypnotizing him.

Suddenly, a wave shot from the whole, knocking the boys from their feat onto the ground, and into the air around the town of Mompten. The boys sat awestruck, not knowing what exactly what happened. Little did they know, is that they had awakened an evil that had been at rest for over 2000 years.
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An Eroding Fear - 11-24-06

Chapter One:

Slipping from a small hole in the ground, a wave shot from the darkness, nocking the boys from their feet. It shot toward the trees, through the branches, and moved so fast that the leaves didn't move until the wind had pasted five minutes later. Moving it's way through the town streets, it hit every person, every store, every car, and everything that came into it's path, and not one living thing noticed.
As it passed into the homes of the suburbs, it entered every room, every person, and every appliance it came into contact with, and moving through the windows, they shattered upon impact, sending their home's residents screaming.
The wave finnally began to dampen as it reached the boundries of the town, reaching out to now almost everything it touched, only the ones that mattered.
Though no one noticed except the ones who had their windows broken, an evil that resided almost 2,000 years ago, one that is so dark, so cruel, had entered their bodies. It now controled their minds, their thoughts, their dreams...with the power of the gods. And it could do what ever it wanted with them.

No matter how bad, or evil, or sick, or twisted...


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