who are they
why should they care
what point is gained
how, when, and where

i search through the wall
for a passage
i hope to fall
and find a secret message

through these sacred shadows
the wind screams in pain
i listen to the sound of the willows
and hear them yell my name

if life leads to death
then love leads to hate
images of u seem to bend
but i will never have my faith





i hope that some of u reply just to show me a reason to keep on writing

thanx
boneblade

i like it. especially the second half.
(replying is so hard to me, and i hope it sounds the way i meant.)

if it wasn't for people like you cross i wouldn't have a reson to write so thank you

That one really hit me Boneblade. Thank you for responding to my poem also. Just because no one replies to your poetry, doesnt mean you should stop writing. I know it's nice to get a response, but your poetry is how you feel and no one can criticize that and tell whether it's good/bad or right/wrong. You do have talent. I like how didnt completely rhyme the entire poem (like I do), but you managed to keep some rhyme in there. I'll be looking for more of your work so you BETTER write more Ttyl..

Sdysticpryncess

You should definetely keep writing. Don't let anyone or anything stop you.