Undefined Remedy

She sees the sadness in her eyes..
she cares not if she lives, or if she dies..
Her morals have gone,
they've faded away.
Implented instead is only sadness and heartbreak...

She'd ask for help if someone were near,
to wipe away all of her tears..
so she stands alone, accompanied by her pain..
its come to the moment where to live is to be in vain.

If you could choose between life and death,
you wouldn't even think twice.
Because your reasons have all left,
all you do is sacrifice.
If you could choose between happiness and sorrow,
you would ponder,
because you've forgotten what happiness feels like,
why do you even bother?

Everyone claims they understand,
that they will be right there if you need somebody to hold your hand..
but whose here with me,
while my pieces fall apart?
Does anyone give a damn, that I cannot feeling anything anymore in my heart??

I cry, and it does nothing,
to mend the sorrow that I feel.
I try and it does nothing,
to allow my soul to heal..
and all i can do is question,
if this moment is for real?
because i have finally had it,
i refuse to fuckin' deal.

Look at me, can't you see the oblivioness in my eyes?
I'm tired of all the shit, of all the lies.
Can't you see that I'm tired of living this way..
Constantly hasseled by my anger, sadness, lack of faith..

If I had to choose between life and death,
I wouldn't think twice..
because all my reasons have left,
all I do is sacrifice..
If i had to choose between happiness and sorrow,
I would ponder,
because i have forgotten what happiness feels like..
why do i even bother?..

Unheard The Cries

She sees the stars start falling,
as the tears run down her face,
Do they fall because they're dying?..
those who never found their place..



Time has lost its essence,
and love has cost me my heart..
if you see bewilderment in me,
its because i'm still perplexed to when i fell apart.
Because as the days go by,
colder I become,
and as the seconds become years,
i begin to lose grasp of who I was..
And all I know is to you,
i've lost my meaning of faith,
but somehow when i need something to believe in
i picture you..



And recently my stars have been falling, all throughout
my hell lit skies..
One precious life who has left, has been calling..
and all i scavenge for is a reason why..



So call me all you want,
and i'll take it as I will,
as the distance breaks my heart,
all because you won't know till..



My hand cups yours, my love,
and you look into my eyes,
you'll know exactly what i'll felt..
and you wont even have to question how or why..



she sees the stars start falling,
as the tears run down her face,
Do they fall because they're dying?..
those who never found their place..

My Tainted Melody

What should I call you,
a liar indulged in deciet..?
Or should I ignore the
tears inside here..?
Should I accept the substance of retreat?

For I grant you all my pieces,
even the whimpers which escape
my lips.
So what does one do, when
all her pieces have left?..
For she gave all she could give?..

A world full of malice;
Thus vegence lies dormant since my start..
For I give my trust so freely,
All to attain a broken heart.

I cry now in frustration,
in contemplation, and pain.
For the substance in which
I see when I shut my eyes,
taunts me in my brain.

Help me God, Help me angels,
anyone who hears my calls..
because my stance has been failing..
As I struggle not to fall..

hmmm.....i've never seen you on DF before, but what lil' i have, i like you...find you comical....so i'ma be nice, and merely state that i am a smurf who doesn't smurfing like rhyme scheme.....but um, post more if you smurfing wish

Why thank you for granting me permission, God. Dumbass.

thatz it!!!!!!! i'm stripping you of your ground privelages!!!!!!!

You lose my complete focus, from the moment you mention 'strip' in the sentence, so try again.

kinda like a lotto ticket huh? sorry, try again.......hmm, ok, um.....well cums to the poetry section......and don't rhyme!

...You keep doing it!!



Anyhow, Next time I post a piece, it shall be free verse. I think you've gained my sympathy. It seems as though your sanity, has been running away from you for quite sometime

yay free verse!!! yay!!!!! rhyme, bad!!!! prose, good!!!!! beer, good!!!! pot, very good!!!! sex, also good!!!!! but granny sex, bad!!!!! very bad......

No one ever mentioned, as you stated so eloquently, 'granny sex'. Any repressed sexual urges you would like to talk about?

i wanna make love to a cactus, but thatz about it.....ooh, and once, i touched my dog in an inappropriate manner....says so right here in my profile...see?

Well back to what you mentioned earlier, "Granny Sex". So basically what you are implicating, is that your grandma was watching while you were doing this?

i don't have a grandma

Somebody else's grandma?

um......ooh, my mom's a grandma....oooh, and she has walked in on me doing the nasty...a few times....as has my father...but they weren't grandparents at the time....and it was only then, that i decided, bannanas aren't just a yummy fruit, they go good in rice crispies and in ice creme and in certain alcoholic beverages.....now post a poem

free verse free verse! and make acronyms with the first letter of each verse! six loves that, haha!

no more granny sex, now grampy sex, thats ok

you homo....you and your acronyms.....and um, you're sig is fucked up.....and um.....yeah

sig fucked up cause of the quote missing? sorry, im drunk and cant be held responsible for my actions

hey you have a thread again. Love it.