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Why Does the Sun Set ? - 10-20-07

Can you come out to play?
Play your tune for me
Come play with me
Take my hand in yours
Close your eyes and touch
Do you feel that?
Thats me beneath your finger tips.
Have fun play along until you can bear it no longer.
Tracing circles around my chest
What game are you playing?
Tracing lines in the air from my lips to yours
you taste so sweet.
What a fun game you play,
but the sun is setting and I can play no longer.
Lets save our game for yet another day.
  
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10-23-07

You sick little monkey!








Welly, welly, welly, welly, welly, welly, well!
-Alex, Clockwork Orange
  
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10-24-07

nice. it loses a little bit at the end, but it's still well done. (%)


if I can make just nine people a day stare at me in abject horror and confusion... i think i've done my job.

there are only 10 kinds of people in the world: those that can read binary, and those that can't.

you know what? i still want a girl with a short skirt and a long jacket. (%)
  
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Inspiration - 10-24-07

Crazy wind whispering sweet nothings in my ear.
How I can listen to you forever.
To me you are nothing but a sweet dream but a memory?
A memory in which I hope to never forget , for if I do I have lost everything I have held on to for so long.
To have lost that memory is to fall to pieces at your feet. Yet to have you always in my being is to fly to the heavens.
Oh crazy wind how you surround, touch my body everywhere. Making me shiver making me moan.
I wish you to never stop wrapping yourself around me, inside me.
Stay with me forever always.
  
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10-24-07

better, this one held together all the way through.

keep it up, i'd like to see what you can do if you keep going.


if I can make just nine people a day stare at me in abject horror and confusion... i think i've done my job.

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A Second Breath - 10-24-07

My thoughts run away with me or is that away from me.
Stay ... stay here
Your only drifting farther away.
Walk back, Run back , Crawl back.
Stop
Look .... Look in to me
don't make me beg again (I won't)
never again will I beg again.
LET GO!
Keep your hands from my throat.
So I may breath again
Now I can breath.
  
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