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whatever makes u happy - 01-09-07

some very random poetry/rants


Looking Through a Wndow

The trees are naked and stripped of life
Mother nature is making them her sacrafice
As the snow hits the ground to purify this palce
The misfortunes of the mayhem of the day go away
For the uprising is coming thier foot steps pave the way
The sky flashes off the wind takes it palce
Joining together in this natural state
Frozen in time this is a new beginning...tusl ot acrete.

A Mesh Of Thots

Insane I remain Indecisive in the brain
Give me hope this shit is lame
Cause im afraid everyday
Live your life through what you see
Rape through words and imagery
Give me the effect for the cause
Give me a name for the cost
Cause im just lost and so are you
So don't judge the ones who speak the truth
Im A mental slut im a whore to the glut
I once dreamed of a world
With no hate no religions
Just the lust to create
Where are the muses at?
putting shit back together I think
Open your minds and let them touch
A mental fuck for all to see
convey your thoughts create somethin
And inspire me...


ANIT
It was cold outside, and I was alone in the middle of the street,
It was a Paxil wet dream, set in a Desyrel scene. Nirvana whispering in my ear, depression floating on a weight less fog around me.
These pills like to attack me in my dreams, they like to set me in these little scenes, epiphanies? To keep me weak.
Insomina for once... save me.

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Wow.
Anit was awesome.
  
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01-21-07

Your words paint a very thoughtful description of people in this generation. Keep writing, it's fantastic. I like it a lot.


Between the mountains of wrong-doing and right-doing there is a field. I will meet you there....
  
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