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gabriel gonzález · **wanna be free... -** 06-25-01

i never seen a blue sky..
never felt the wind
on my skin..
all the things have changed
since you came to my life
a light of hope
has touched my soul
and now, desesperated
i feel that i'll wake up
you know the funny thing about it
is that i couldnt answer
all those feelings
pieces of a big thing..
but not together..
and making at the distance..
a big one thing..
love, fear, pain, hope
free...
wanna be free!!!!
gonna be free!!!!

i never seen a blue sky
my skin has never been warmed by the sun
got to be free!!
moving from this dead planet..
to your body, white goddess
PLEASE..
let me run from this dream..
if i wake up, i'll be so free
not the same grey always...
i wanna see your face
because that i feel that
you, goddess fly over me
and you touch my hair
with your legs..
wanna be free!!!!
gonna be free!!!!
the soft of the water..
the warm of the fire..
the love that i want so much
let gomy soul..
let go my wings
and let me live like a bird
that follow him's dreams
and if the death find me,
i wont be sad, i will die in glory..

everything is clear now..
life is just a dream you know..
its never ending.
a white light is coming..
let all behind and
start again, just like a child
break my jail,
i will start again
like a child learning to walk
now, tears... but different tahn the normal ones..
those are happy tears..
your love is the only thing i have
you.. in the skies, great and white
never seen a blue sky
never felt the light.. BEFORE
fear, hope, light, heaven..
WANNA BE FREE!!!!!!

right to you
share my happiness
close to you.. for ever
the blUe is so beautiful
all the nights i will see you
I WILL BE FREE!!!
now that i can see
your real form
i know that you always
will show yourself in the night
just in the night..
and idf you are too far from me..
you gave me the energy to continue..
your face.. like a goddess..
happiness and lonelyness and mixed
in my hearth
because i always wanted to be..
next to you..
but because of my destiny..
i wont be there..
but i will live
thinking about you..
and if a dream shows you next to me..
then i wont need my freedom,
and i will sleep in that dream..
forever........

NightWalker · 07-12-01

Wow, I'm.. jusr wow. I like your work. Very moving.

Lost~Child · 07-13-01

I really liked it. This one is really good.

gabriel gonzález · **thanks -** 07-15-01

thanks you two...
the words that you writte is all that make me writte again.
how about your work?

Lost~Child · 07-16-01

just wanted to say that cielo azul was better, but I guess english is ok. I still like it either way, spanish made it mean more. Keep writing.

Dragons_Cry · 07-16-01

wow..perfect...just perfect....

gabriel gonzález · **cielo azul... -** 07-16-01

yep.. the first version of the poem was in spanish..
but nobody understood it..
so i wanted a english version, even if i dont know much english...
renamber that my natal country is chile, and we all here speak spanish....
i hope, that the spell problems dont make my work go down

well, thanks all, and bye..

gabriel gonzález · **well -** 07-16-01

so where is the cofee?

gabriel gonzález · **aaarhhhg -** 07-17-01

noise..
blah blah blah

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