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Through My Eyes - 10-09-07

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May I ask why you left me alone to die?
Only those who love you can bring the pain that kills you.
The scars you left made me hate who I am.
How did such beauty become so evil?
Every dying breath is a sigh of relief.
Remember the way it never was?

Forgive me for not being everything that you are.
Am I not who you wanted me to be?
The angel you left to protect me from evil
Hurt me more than any demon ever could.
Every time I see you, I see myself.
Remember the way it never was?
  
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10-13-07

ohhh that's so beautiful! and the acronym is so good!
  
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11-14-07

Thanks Fandango!

Here are the lyrics to my latest single-getting some airplay in my hometown-Shitlanta, GA.

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She woke up just after midnight-just like so many times before.
Never bothered turnin on a light, and slowly wandered out the door.

(Her) clouded visions cold and dark as night (when) she saw the old man by the store
Look up and flash his evil, haunting grin-just like so many times before.


Now she wonders what she's doing here. She wants nothing more than to stop falling down.
But the people's faces never change. She tries to scream, but can't make a sound.
And she asks herself again, "Will I wake up before I hit the ground?"

Every clock was stopped at midnight-just like so many times before.
She hid in shadows of the city lights that forever stood ignored.
Every stranger that she knew so well passed as if she wasn't there.
While she faced her neverending Hell in the absence of their stares.

Now she wonders what she's doing here. She wants nothing more than to stop falling down.
But the people's faces never change. She tries to scream, but can't make a sound.
And she asks herself again, "Will I wake up before I hit the ground?"

She woke up just after midnight-just like so many times before.
Never bothered turnin on a light, and slowly wandered out the door.
  
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