Tears
PoetryDiscuss Tears in the The Pen forums; I´m a musician (mainly a guitarist) and I made this song for an album I was working on, wich I´ll gradually be posting the lyrics for you people ...
Location: Recuerde el alma dormida, avive el seso y despierte, contemplando cómo se passa la vida cómo se viene la muerte tan callando; cuán presto se va el plazer, cómo después de acordado, da dolor; cómo a nuestro parescer cualquiera tiempo passado fue mejor
I´m a musician (mainly a guitarist) and I made this song for an album I was working on, wich I´ll gradually be posting the lyrics for you people to tell me what you think, but anyways... here´s the last song of the album...
Tears
Tears... we are born,
We sleep oblivius to reality outside
Covered by blankets and the mother´s arms
Watching, covered in calm, the night stands.
"Live life as if tomorrow we´ll be gone"
She said when life was consumed by my thoughts
I didn´t ran towards the unsteady roads
Walked, instead, blinded by the illusion of love
We are standing over rocks, stumbling
over the deep and unpredictable sea of uncertainty
Kneel, and moist your lips with it´s water
Reality can be as bitter as the salt covering the ocean
Or as sweet as the beauty that´s overshadowed by our pain.
"It's not the same light that blinded you yesterday
Time has moved on, yet the sobs are still the same
The tears that kissed the grave yesterday
Carry the same grieve as the ones of today."
They try to dry themself off pain
Hopelessly she seeks the warm of his heart
By the tombstone that reads "Unknown".
"They are not heroes because of the way they died
but because of the way they lived"
Reflects in her eyes, wet
from the nights below the sheets of disconsolation...
We dance over the theatre of tragedy
Searching love in a corner
We feel separate from each other
We fear being caught by deseption
Now like a soft breeze... life is over...
Tears... we are gone,
We rest oblivius to reality over our heads
Covered by the grass of the fertile ground
Shining six feet over, surrounded by silence, the moon stands.
All forms or cristism is good... and I want to hear it so I can get good at this...
PEACE...
Adesso che ho perso la vista, ci vedo meglio e di piu
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"Everything you need is around you. The only danger is inside you."
Location: Recuerde el alma dormida, avive el seso y despierte, contemplando cómo se passa la vida cómo se viene la muerte tan callando; cuán presto se va el plazer, cómo después de acordado, da dolor; cómo a nuestro parescer cualquiera tiempo passado fue mejor
Hey, the lyrics you obviousley have spent a long time working on are very good, great in fact! I like them a lot, you tend to have written about similar aspects of life as I do, I think youre lyrics are a 9/10, keep up the good work, oh, and the wierd thing is, I write song lyrics and poetry, and i play drums! No album yet though, you need other band members for some shit like that to come about!
Well, if you got time, check out my stuff under the search, and leave what you think of them!
Later......
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Location: This great place called here, have you ever been, here? I know you would love it, and never leave this place, even if you wanted to you can't escape
As I lay in your arms, I think. You never could complete me, you could never fill the void, but atleast, you would never make me cry. You would never make me want to die. But is it better to be truly in love, than here with you in a world that nothing is complete, nothing is whole, because you are not him, the one I truly love.
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