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Songs are poems too. - 07-09-04

Yeah they are. Anyway, I don't so much write poetry as much as I do lyrics and music...so I suppose I'll post music lyrics here. Feel free to criticize, praise, make death threats, etc...just do not copy, as all material is copyrighted...

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Introspection
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(Verse)
I've been chasing dreams
Sometimes it seems
They're all I've got left
To call my own
I stare at the stars
Always wondering
Could everything change?
I just don't know

(Chorus)
Because I'm here, as ever
With a song in my heart
A tune on my lips
Wondering what the day will bring
And here I'll stay
Though I'm not sure why
I guess its because
I've songs left to sing

(Verse)
I think dreams have failed
My reality, it seems
Is what I must take
And run with
My mind's in the stars
Still wondering
Was I a fool to hope?
How will I ever know?

(Chorus)
Because I'm here, as ever
With a song in my heart
A tune on my lips
Wondering what the day will bring
And here I'll stay
Though I'm not sure why
I guess its because
I've songs left to sing


Hey, bread is a good time for me...a-woodle-oo-doo, singing bread is a good time for EVERYbody...
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07-09-04

I find something fun to do is to start off modeling a song after another (in this case, it fits Weezer's "Butterfly" and then changing the melody and music totally.

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Running
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(Verse)
Yesterday I found my pride
And I told you what I feel
I can't tell you what it meant

When I woke up today
Wondered what it all was for
I think I threw it all away
Crumpled up just like the rest

(Chorus)
I'm sorry that you are there
Sorry that you caught my stare
And now I think I want this to stop
Everytime I thought that we were close
We were even farther away
I don't know what else to say

(Verse)
If I had another chance
Don't know if I would remain
Would I ever dance this dance?

Maybe everything was fake
Should not have waited here so long
Should have known just when to take
All my things and run away

(Verse)
I'm sorry that you are there
Sorry that you caught my stare
And now I think I want this to stop
Everytime I thought that we were close
We were even farther away
I don't know what else to say

(Verse, slower)
And if I should try again,
Could it all change in the end?
Would it matter if it did?

I'm running
I'm running
I'm running
Far, far away.


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07-09-04

We never want to say the truth, no matter how obvious it is...

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Lie
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I keep my distance
Can't bring myself to
It's something too hard
Don't wanna hurt you
Face in my hands
I hear myself speak
Another lie
Promise I can't keep
I'm too caught in this
Problem I won't miss

I'm so tired
I feel so weak
The sun is setting
Something I can't keep
Yet I still pretend
I feel so cold
She asks me whats wrong
I say I don't know
I keep my distance
I keep myself away from the truth

I keep my distance
I feel so weak
Another lie
Something I can't keep
Face in my hands
I feel so cold
Don't wanna hurt you
What else can I do?
She asks me what's wrong
I lie


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07-09-04

hmm very cool songs and images. I could see them being very cool with the music. great job.


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07-11-04

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Seize the Day
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(v)
Extraordinary,
I can't explain the area
That my mind is in tonight
Leave behind the old and tired
Find something new to inspire
Seizing the day once again

(c)
New faces in new places
A whirlwind I can't comprehend
I'm riding the waves
The rise and fall of the days
Until I find my place in the sun

(v)
Anticipation
I can't hold my patience
Until this is mine day and night
Run, run, towards the light
Just so that we might
Seize the day once again

(c)
New faces in new places
A whirlwind I can't comprehend
I'm riding the waves
The rise and fall of the days
Until I find my place in the sun


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07-11-04

sweet........."I'm riding the waves
The rise and fall of the days
Until I find my place in the sun"

very cool wording.


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07-12-04

Thanks for the praise


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07-17-04

I think this comes off a little Dashboard-ish...but oh well.

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Parting Words (Start and Finish)
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So here it starts
We grow apart
And all the promises fall away
Yes, here it starts
When we find out
That we aren't gonna be
Anything, anymore - -
And I don't care

So just write me off,
Please,
It'll be so painless
Just write me off,
Go on like nothing happened
Time's change,
You know that I will too
So don't keep up hope
Because I've got none left for you

And here it ends
We're around the bend
Things look different from here
Yes, here it ends
When it falls away
Because the jump we made
Wasn't in good faith

So just write me off,
Please,
It'll be so painless
Just write me off,
Go on like nothing happened
Time's change,
You know that I will too
So don't keep up hope
Because I've got none left for you

A promise made in ignorance,
Ignorance of the world
Won't be allowed to hold me back
The promise leads to decadance
Of the very worst kind
I'll not have it tear my insides

So just write me off,
Please,
It'll be so painless
Just write me off,
Go on like nothing happened
Time's change,
You know that I will too
So don't keep up hope
Because I've got none left for you


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07-17-04

hmm very dismal.


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07-17-04

I was in a "leave me the HELL alone" mood towards another, and it poured out...

Here's a normal poem which I was bored one day and wrote...

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Musings of a Book on a Midsummer Morning
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The book sat quietly,
Minding its own business.
It never asked for this,
It didn't want this to happen.
A figure disturbed its rest,
And it reluctantly opened.
The book yawned through the flipped pages,
And winced at the stress upon its spine.
How would you like to be opened up and read?


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07-18-04

hahaah that was funny, you never think of things like that until someone brings it to your attention. great job, you made me laugh.


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07-31-04

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Skies So Blue
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This world has opened up
And now I'm seeing more
Than I ever have before
And yeah, you know it was you

I made a call today
Just to hear a voice
You know that was my choice
And yeah, you know it was you

(chorus)
And if I went into the past
I'd keep it just the same
'Cause even if it starts to rain
I still will keep the flame
And when I look into your eyes
Just know what's on my mind...

You are so beautiful.

I'm seeing skies,
I'm seeing skies so blue
The sun's been shining through
Yeah, you know it was you

And now I've gone and learned
What makes this world turn
And yeah, you know that it's you

(chorus)
And if I went into the past
I'd keep it just the same
'Cause even if it starts to rain
I still will keep the flame
And when I look into your eyes
Just know what's on my mind...

You are so beautiful.
You are so beautiful.

I'm seeing skies,
I'm seeing skies so blue
The sun's been shining through...


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08-01-04

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08-03-04

I'm glad I have a fan SOMEwhere. Other than my girlfriend. And the moderator to boot. Are you just being nice? Hehe...


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08-04-04

lol. what you mean and a moderator, I am highly sought after, my oppinion means something..lol jk. it's all good and I am never 'just nice'


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02-05-05

Resurrected, because it was requested.

Actually, I got freaked out over copyright stuff, then realized that this account can be traced to me, and the date and time of posting is here, so that's good, its like the postmark if I was mailing a tape to myself. Right.

Anyway.
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Sunrise

Here I sit on the edge
Of a new day rising up
I see the sun-bathed corners of the world
Staring back at me
The warmth approaches,
it fills me up inside
And it can't be denied,
That there's something in this air

I can't help feeling so alive today
My senses are electric;
There's something out there
Something fresh, something new
Something so much more
Than I'm used to
There's a new road out there today
A road that's fresh,
A road that's new
Where will it take me?

Sure, I have doubts
I don't want hopes to be too high
Come crashing out of the sky
But still, I'm confident
So I'll press on, press on
And see this through
I think fireworks will fly
This dream I have, it simply feels right

I can't help feeling so alive today
My senses are electric;
There's something out there
Something fresh, something new
Something so much more
Than I'm used to
There's a new road out there today
A road that's fresh,
A road that's new
Where will it take me?


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02-05-05

I wrote my own little melody to the chorus of "skies so blue"... it writes itself. Good job.


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02-05-05

I wrote that one to coldplay's "yellow" (that should be totally obvious if you look at it again...the structure's similar) and then did totally different stuff with the music. I don't know if I'll ever use that one thought.


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02-05-05

haha. I Hate Coldplay.

I wrote a better song than you then, if you wrote the music (akin to the lyrics) akin to the song "Yellow"....man, I hate that song. gah.


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02-05-05

No, just the lyrics. Everything else is pretty different.


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