I'm new to this site, so I don't know if I'll get any responses, but I'll post a few of my poems..Comments are appreciated =)


This one, if not THE best, is one of my best poems, in my opinion...


Love-Lost Fantasy

The underminding
Tell-tale blinding
Of the windblown sunset shore.
The unsaid grinding
Of graveyard findings
That the glistened sea waves bore.

The overthrowing
She's undergoing
As the heavy November winds blow.
Skies are snowing,
As Pine stands crowing,
Vindictive lyric of lesser foe.

So she shambles
Through the scramble
Of chaotic lifelong dreams.
She takes the gamble
From myths of Campbell
And heeds the cry of her own screams.

She took the razor
The blood not phase her
And cut through her porcelain fate.
Under the laser
Of her appraiser
Sliced the pain with a blade of hate.

She bid her token
Of prayers unspoken
As crimson anguish stained the floor.
Closed eyes unwoken
Heart lain broken
Her hair seeped in love-lost gore.

Moonlit setting
As clouds float, sweating
Icy droplets of sin-filled endeavour.
Scene, unforgetting
But non-regretting
My vampyric angel gone forever.


~Kenneh

Set Free

My love is but a fire,
Feed it and it will stay.
Burning on until the night,
The rain washed it away.

Screeching "Freedom" as it died,
My hatred's burning out.
My heart is dead, and soon you too,
Believe without a doubt.

Now your lies are bleeding through,
I hate you even more.
You took it all, just for yourself,
You ungrateful little whore!

When you die, I will rejoice,
And dance around the flares.
The flares of love, lost for your blood,
Thats dripping from your hair.

Now you're dead, and I will shout,
My joyful words of glee.
Your corpse is there, laying limp,
You're finally set free.

~Kenneh

One More Kiss and Two More Waves

The waves brush against the shore,
As I feel your eyes,
Watching me-
Adoring me-
I melt into them.
Emerald jewels of Divinity.
Knee-deep in the lunar reflection.
Waves pushing us towards shore.
I hold you in my arms,
Feel your warmth-
Eternal happiness in one moment.
My lips touch yours.
The moon backgrounds your face,
The scenery of my dreams-
My heart beats with yours.
My soul opens itself to you.
I'm yours-
One more kiss and two more waves,
I'll hold you again someday.

~Kenneh


--Depending on the feedback I get, I might post more later, but I'll just leave you with this for now...I'm open to criticism =P

Good stuff! I may not have used "vampyric" to describe someone capable of suicide, but that's just me. Thanks for great works.

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