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AngelwithFangs · **Red Red Rose -** 07-22-01

Red Red Rose
hatred
blackness
empty stomach
mind full to the point of overflowing
all too overwhelming
the rose is dead

love
stormy clouds
hot cold, hot cold
clouds ready to break
the red red rose is dead

tears
icicles peircing my lids
blood running down my face
clouds split
the red red rose is dead and black

(p.s even if you hate it tell me so i know what you all like)

powder · 07-22-01

i like it angel

i think very good

AngelwithFangs · 07-22-01

Thanks Powder

it was kinda a spir of the moment thing. I wrote it and like ten minutes later i posted it.

powder · 07-22-01

are you going to write more Angel?

AngelwithFangs · 07-23-01

OF COURSE.

the only catch is what i write repersents the negitivy in my life, so if i am in a good mood i get like serious writers block. but we can always count on you know who to piss me off.

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powder is Offline meow Posts: 12,156 Gallery: 0 : 0 Join Date: Jun 2001	07-22-01 i like it angel i think very good "people are not snowflakes" One Hand Washes The Other. Curiouser And Curiouser

AngelwithFangs is Offline Registered User Posts: 37 Gallery: 0 : 0 Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: canada	07-22-01 Thanks Powder it was kinda a spir of the moment thing. I wrote it and like ten minutes later i posted it.

powder is Offline meow Posts: 12,156 Gallery: 0 : 0 Join Date: Jun 2001	07-22-01 are you going to write more Angel? "people are not snowflakes" One Hand Washes The Other. Curiouser And Curiouser

AngelwithFangs is Offline Registered User Posts: 37 Gallery: 0 : 0 Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: canada	07-23-01 OF COURSE. the only catch is what i write repersents the negitivy in my life, so if i am in a good mood i get like serious writers block. but we can always count on you know who to piss me off.