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*walks in* I have an invitation Thanx for bringing me here Lily


"Dont try to fix me, I'm not broken" -Evanescence "Hello"

-Anything worth having-
-Is worth waiting for-

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*applauds Arcole*


"Eyes of a fallen angel, eyes of a tragedy." ~APC
"Enrobed in endless black
It trails along behind me,
Dusting my path.
My shape is lost
Within this grand excess.
Somehow, my hands escape through holes,
Holding many roses.
I have no feet,
I can barely see in front of me;
My face has also been shrouded.
One tear is shed; still I am shocked.
The first person I ever saw die
Lies beneath this stone and dirt.
I place the roses on the mound,
Bask in the silence of the dark.
I turn, and walk away;
Unable to say goodbye. "
~Me.
  
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*claps hands* beautiful arcole, now tell me, are you a dancer?


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hey !, (cheers too) wait I had drunk mine, ( gets another ) thanks but I am who has to thank you all.


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DD *hugs her* you will always be welcome........


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Thanks IntenseIntent another drink ?hehehe, welcome DarkDream.

White Lily, who ? me ?.


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hey !, (cheers too) wait I had drunk mine, ( gets another ) thanks but I am who has to thank you all.
Why are you thanking us?
*gets a refill*


"Eyes of a fallen angel, eyes of a tragedy." ~APC
"Enrobed in endless black
It trails along behind me,
Dusting my path.
My shape is lost
Within this grand excess.
Somehow, my hands escape through holes,
Holding many roses.
I have no feet,
I can barely see in front of me;
My face has also been shrouded.
One tear is shed; still I am shocked.
The first person I ever saw die
Lies beneath this stone and dirt.
I place the roses on the mound,
Bask in the silence of the dark.
I turn, and walk away;
Unable to say goodbye. "
~Me.
  
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thanx Lily *hugglez back* You so sweet to me~ hehe :p


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yes you arcole.....you dance or what? *glares*


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Why are you thanking us?
*gets a refill*
for beign...


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*walks in* I have an invitation Thanx for bringing me here Lily
Hi Are you posting too?


"Eyes of a fallen angel, eyes of a tragedy." ~APC
"Enrobed in endless black
It trails along behind me,
Dusting my path.
My shape is lost
Within this grand excess.
Somehow, my hands escape through holes,
Holding many roses.
I have no feet,
I can barely see in front of me;
My face has also been shrouded.
One tear is shed; still I am shocked.
The first person I ever saw die
Lies beneath this stone and dirt.
I place the roses on the mound,
Bask in the silence of the dark.
I turn, and walk away;
Unable to say goodbye. "
~Me.
  
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thanx Lily *hugglez back* You so sweet to me~ hehe :p
Me sweet? I think you have me confused with someone else.........*nervously looks around* ehm, need more to drink.........


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I dance I dance , allow me to dance with you , beautiful lady? ( and now I can say it hehehe).
Ok, but before I'm going to break a dish because I love doing it as greek feasts. ( crash! ) hehehe, let's dance.


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hehe what fun, what did ya put in this punch arcole? hehe


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hehe yes let's......come and join us DD and intenseintent ( I need a nick name for ya)


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OooOoh, I like this idea!! *makes sure this is a reply and not a random post on a brand new thread*
Ok, I'm all set, I've been lurking at the back of the room, watching the suspiciously manic crowd and the festivities...but hey, the more the merrier, right? (I think i have a sugar high from all the ice cream I ate today!) P.S.(hope this doesn't drearify the atmosphere)

~Theif~
You took her away
She was mine
You don't understand.
No one can understand.
She was mine,
We were one.
So happy were the days,
We were together,
We were forever,
But then you came along
You ruined it all
You took her away
I'm all alone
The lonliness it eating
Away my mind, my soul.
The emptiness without her
Here with me
The pain I feel is totalitarian
All because of you
You tore my insides out
When you stole her away.
I hated you
from the beginning
I knew I'd have to pay
I didn't think it would last so long
Then you f*cking took her away
I trusted you with her,
I trusted her mind,
She deserves better than scum like you,
But once again, she'll be mine.
  
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yes the more the merrier............
Arcole you are a devine dancer...... hehe


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(whilst dancing)

All those who thinks
we have too happiness inside of us,
don't fool yourselves,
we are the wicked ones.
This is a hall,
where humans and rare beigns
and glimpses and wolves,
display their energy , their sorrow,
their souls.

Moments of glory,
I have a solid dream,
moving around me,
making me kneel.


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*applauses renovate* Ya made it! Great poem, reminds me of someone... (yes all of them)Relates so much to my life I had tears (honesty, would I lie to ya?)


"Eyes of a fallen angel, eyes of a tragedy." ~APC
"Enrobed in endless black
It trails along behind me,
Dusting my path.
My shape is lost
Within this grand excess.
Somehow, my hands escape through holes,
Holding many roses.
I have no feet,
I can barely see in front of me;
My face has also been shrouded.
One tear is shed; still I am shocked.
The first person I ever saw die
Lies beneath this stone and dirt.
I place the roses on the mound,
Bask in the silence of the dark.
I turn, and walk away;
Unable to say goodbye. "
~Me.
  
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Aww, spanx Rach
I have a stack of untyped poems here, maybe i'll add a few more!! And I'm sooo NOT tellin you who/what that poem is about!!! So kwicherbichin, all I'll say is nyareu!!!
  
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