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Poetry Discuss Our Voices in the The Pen forums; Death winks, --There slashed A cross shaped cut upon our hearts. Every euphoric dream oozed out of our minds, --Then sickenly contorted To become repugnant, devil-driven nightmares. But we ...
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Our Voices - 02-21-07

Death winks,
--There slashed
A cross shaped cut upon our hearts.

Every euphoric dream oozed out of our minds,
--Then sickenly contorted
To become repugnant, devil-driven nightmares.

But we seem to learn to live on,
--Waiting
For the next day to rip us apart.

Sadistic reminder of everyday spent,
--Just wasted
On the corner of another dead street.

Can you hear this calling,
--Whispers
In your head that send you insane.

We hunger..
--To break skin
--Tear away this disease
--To find ourselves
--Curious..

To what do we have to offer?

Our voices a cacophonic deception,
--Useless
In the description of our destitution.

We want to believe beyond our humanity,
--Live immortal
Between holy words and this wasted reality.

We hunger..
--To break skin
--Tear away this disease
--To find ourselves
--Curious..

To why we are so good at destroying each other?
  
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02-22-07

nice work.

the structure reminds me of some of my favorite pieces.

i like the thought work in there.


if I can make just nine people a day stare at me in abject horror and confusion... i think i've done my job.

there are only 10 kinds of people in the world: those that can read binary, and those that can't.

you know what? i still want a girl with a short skirt and a long jacket. (%)
  
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02-22-07

It appears lyrical. I enjoyed the structure as well.

My compliments extend themselves to the wonderful job you did of explaining something that would seemingly require more lines. Thank you for writing.


Forget the epsilon
Burn your lexicon
  
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02-22-07

Alive with colors like indigo and Magenta


kangaroo done hung the guilty with the innocent.
-"The Pot" 10,000 days (Tool)

see kangaroo courts
  
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