*steps into the lil domain of wel read ppl*

Greetings

Since I'm most of the time oozing though the forum, I just as well make a thread in here to post some things I write while I'm here.
Feel free to comment.


*takes a bow and leaves some notes laying around*

Sadness struck me
While I was happy
While I was with friends
The cold struck me
While it was warm
While it was hot
My feelings struck me most of all
While I was emotional
While I was with you

Do you not see?
Ever since I've been what I am
I see the eyes within my eyes
The face behind my face
I cannot deny me
This facade is needed no more
Except to mislead, to prey
I will be known
Yet I will not

Blessed with ignorance I was
Chilled to the bone though
Melting ice by mere presence
Alone I suddenly fell
Safely into the warmth
Happiness I can offer
My love

The creepy feeling
Nothing there
Nobody aware
Defeaned by the invisible force
Sight lacking
Tender touch
Relieing the pressure
-P O P-

Did I mention I suck at dates?

the first date should b 07-04-02
the second 08-04-02

just to keep the record straight

Have I known
Was it there
I haven't changed
Did I
Did I know
Feel
I'm the same
Even more
Yet less
As if not whole
As if there's missing
Something
Someone
And only when confronted
Crawling into my mind
Stirring
Saddening me
Sleep
Forgotten dreams
I will heal
If only
With your thought

Amongst equals
Amongst strangers
Here I breath
Waiting
Looking at the time
Passing by
Crawling
Looks and sight
Noises strange
Always heard

k my own fault

wasn't finished..
then again..perhaps my subconscience did me a favor
reading it again..
something is missing
an ending
a story
and yet
it's complete



uhm..this was me rambling..

INPUT IS APPRECIATED

the wall isn't that good with fiving feedback

nice stuff... i rather dig your writing...

thanks!



>FuckDoll<

thnx

Feeling alone and isolated
Fearing all which lays ahead
Sweet words whispered
Gentle touches felt

Things of which I noramlly melted
My joy would normally spread
All that just dissapeared
As with whipping of a belt

The cold is creeping up to me
Despite my efforts of warming
My sight is fading untill I cannot see

The void below is calling
I never realised I jumped
All left is mere falling

mer!! hunny your good at this stuff! i wish i can do things like this but i cant so bah!

oez you rule

*takes a bow n tips his hat*

I don't smoke I don't drink
I bleed, look what you made me do

A psychiatrist, a shrink?
What to do with you.

A moment, a mere blink...
And you will have caught my FLUE.






(sounds better if a maniac is actually putting some emotion to that...think it'll scare the shit out of barbies )

Some evil spawned from the depts of my head
It made me do it
Or was it ignorance?
No matter
Don't care
It can be changed
It's not a rock
My spelling sucks and that just showed
Once more
Throughout the forum
You can see
What an annoyance a typo gremlin can be





hmm..ranting is fun

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(that was a point..not the point)
The point was that I meant Flu instead of flue

sorry..
think it makes more sense now

hehe..

never saw that one...

editing my own mails..hmm..how very interesting


then I could write things and delete it..
so no1 will see my thoughts

They're mine, MINE, ALL MINE, ALL MINE

*scutters off*


and even a button to rate my thread..oh the ideas..the pondering..

I must get my mind a grip...


..

*scutters off some more*

Here I am lost in thoughts
Of you and me
Together, endlesly

This gap within
The endless despair
Me not being there

I cry, I weep
Nothing to do
But being happy with you