Let me one more time
Look into your eyes
To try to see again
What I once saw before

Let me one more time
Hold you in my arms
To see if i feel
The way i felt before

Let me one more time
Hear your sweet voice
To see if i can hear
What i've heard many times before

Let me one more time
Feel your arms around me
To see if you still care
Like i know you cared before

Let me one more time
See your precious smile
To know if i can once again
Make you smile like before

Let me one more time
Tell you i love you
To make sure you still know
Before you want to let me go

its so beautiful it makes me want to cry. You are talented, I really like this poem. Its like you took everything i was feeling and you wrote is on paper. You are gifted, i hope to see more

i was at work when i wrote this, didnt know what i was writing about at the time but, this is a good poem i feel, made my boyfriend think,

aahhhhhh!!! you made me cry!! dam u! , dam that was a really good poem , i mean like a REALLY FUCKIN good poem , i get that way all the time , feeling like that , anyway , that was excellent and i'd love to see more work , keep it up

That was excellent... ::sniff sniff:: Pardon me, now i feel depressed and alone. keep up the good work, i love it.

sick, disturbed, fucked up...
yup taz what I feel when I read 'an almost lost love' - poem

I hate love poetry...
I really hate it....
makes me wanna hate even more...
while I cant....
Im already too full of hate...
cant handle more...

read this:

KreatoR



Solitude simplifies single souls,
To seek an outcome to eternal questions
Implosive minds explore onez thoughts
What is what?
Try and pass the next section.

Darkness everywhere
Being ever clear
The beginning is nothing
The end the same
The creator of all
The shadow with no name

Fierce little creatures
Behold what can be done
For we have many features
Knowledge now is won
Third eyes see further
Sole souls gather and spawn
It won’t be no harder
As arrived before dawn

Darkness,
Creator of light
Just to fuck around
In awaitance of death
With answers to be found
Then starts the haunt…


(written by the unknown, hehe)

great poem ... i loved it

ya know, I'm in school right now, and I DON'T wanna cry in front of my peers, but damnit, I'm close. I'm going through the same thing with one of my exes, (the one I wrote about in To Adam (the one I forgot) and What do these dreams mean). It hit a nerve in me, and now I don't know what to think. You have great talent, so keep writing!

aww chicky..that was soo budimus..you made me feel this heavy feeling..i can relate and I'm sure everyone can too..I love it..keep writing for me

i just wanted to tell everyone that this poem is being published in a book. im very excited.

the working title is 'the silence within'