i dont think ive ever written a good poem in my life,these are just a bunch of my thoughts sqashed together,and so i know they suck.
but they are my thoughts,i just need to write sometimes,even if nothing good comes from it ..


~sadnes~

Pure uglyness
Knowing it so well
Hateing it so much
An escape must be made
Complet hatred
Disapearing
Going down
This spiral called life
Heading no where
So close to my end

Pretending
Almost tricking them all
Works all the time
Tears filling my thoughts
They'll think im fine
Always do
Sadness goes un noticed
Or is it they just dont care..

One belived in whishes
The magic has all faded
Left with nothingness
Once thought to be real
The fantasy faded away
So long ago now
Emptyness remains..

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Welcome to DF!! Great work!

thanks you very much FenrisWUlfe,i wouldnt say ive got a talent,i just write stuff the way i see things and how i feel,but thanks


i read some of your stuff,very impressive
i shall post some more of mine soon..

here is something i wrote awhile ago


Sitting
So quiet and calm
Thats what you see
On the inside,im screaming
The very loudness echos through me
silence remains

Thinking
What do people see me as
I watch them
Watching me
To some i bring fear
While others i bring joy

Lost now
In my very thoughts
Caring nothing for the things around me
On with my day dreams
For only they bring some kind of twisted happyness




one good thing about any of my poems..they are never all to long,so even if they suck..there wont be alot to read anyways..

one of my least favorit ones,why im bothering to post it..i dont know


slice and dice
cut away the pain
we are so diffrent
yet so much the same

its my time to leave
remember its not your fault
please dont take it that way
i just need to ease the pain
theres no other way

a road leading nowhere
lost in the dark
the darkness consumes my life
it seems to never end

cant be saved from myself
this perfect world
not so grand after all
so complicated
full of fear and death

one more
then im leaving for the night

Thinking of you
This feeling inside
I wish for it no more
Not wanting to get attached
I know it will happen
Its already begun
Falling for you
Scared
Not wanting to get hurt
Cant bare it again
Will you be the same?
Run off..
Leave me in pain
To die alone
Forever in agony.

OH MY GOD. you are really good babe. I ESPECIALLY like the last three, i can relate to those alot right now....wow you are really good. keep it up. i'd like to see some more soon please.

and if you would like to read some poems that ring to your note go read my thread its called, life on another note.

you are really good babe...WRITE MORE!!!

love
-me
-B

thank you ever so much
i will post more soon.
also i shall take a look at your thread

Cant breath
Need to escape
Tightness
Chocking now
I collapse
Failing to take in
All of which is around me
This horrid person
Molded from birth
Pathetic in every which way
The ruiner of all
Nothing ahead
A life gone to waste
The one who lives in this world
The one who is a disgrace

you are ever so welcome
i like your poems . they are very good.
i shall be back to read more soon.

from:
-me
brandi

thanks DeLiRiOuS
ive got another to post,it was somwhat from a dream i had,anyways,here it is..

Wondering now
Just what your doing
Imagining you sleeping
Watching
So calm and rested
What do you dream
Am i ever there

Dreaming of you
A fantasy
Its finally come true
Such wonders may happen
Being with you

Then the dream turns to great sadness
Torn away from you
Great pain in my heart
For im awake now
Im without you
Forever wishing
Lost in the dark

*REALLY LOUD CLAPS..THE ONES THAT ARE HEARD FROM ACROSS THE ROOM*

WOW i think this is the beggining of a beautiful friend ship!!

p.s. i REALLY like that last one...muah muah!!

Dude very nice poems! I hope that you write more and never stop. Keep up your tallent girl.

thank you DeLiRiOuS and shy shy
i will post more very soon for you to read

here is one i wrote awhile back,its not very good
hope you like it though..

Words cannot describe
The pain in which i feel
For you were ripped from our lives
A big hole remains
Wanting to cry for you
I only wish i could
Seal myself away
Never letting anyone in
Not letting anything out

On the day we all came
To say our final goodbyes
I didnt weap a tear for you
Held it all in
A great guilt now reamains

I hope you know i loved you
And that i love you still
Have my whole life
You should know i always will
Your forever in my heart

You left us here broken
Without you
But one day i know
Ill see you again
Untill that day comes
Goodbye my beloved friend

wow...*speechless*....*jaw hits floor* *wow

That one was sad.

i take your wow's as a good sign?!
never been able to make someone speachless,so thanks i think..
yes,i know its a wee bit sad,well just a bit..
i shall have more at some point..

havint wrote nothing in here for awhile.
i guess i could write a little something.


sadness
overcomes my every thought
tears form
an everlasting river
drown in my own sorrow
head throbing
wondering
what now?
to live?
go through this life
mind invaded by the sadness
in which my life is consumed
to die?
the final step
last of all things
all will get there
in the end thats something we all have in common
we all die
its just a matter of time

Broken smile
Tortured thoughts
A life made from mysery
Waiting to fall
Never get back up
You threw me away
This feeling of rejection
Numbness inside
Never to be saved
Its just to late

An empty cut
Take me for a ride
Down to hell
Please
Do not be mad
Your partialy to blame
For the sadness i lived through
No worries now
Can feel better
For yourself
Now that i am gone

I threw it away
Even though i was scared
The pain ate at me
Had to end it all
Knew you wouldnt care