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Mystery - 02-21-07

I have started something I can not finish.
What to do when she is all you cherish?
In your mind you would do all that it takes.
To make her the girl with the smelliest face.
In reality you try but your hands are tight.
Like two mountains on the edge of a fight.
You gave up on love, at least for an hour.
What a fool, no one can run from desire.
The answer is in front of you, it is so clear.
Listen to me closely, and feel no fear.
Make your heart do the talking, let it sing.
Trust me in this, and forget diamond rings.
It knows what best for you, why would I lie?
You'll find yourself floating, reaching the sky.
What has been said makes a lot of sense.
But the mystery remains, "Will I possess?"
The question is too hard to be shown.
The answer is too clear to be revealed.
There are no guarantees in the matter of the heart.
You just have to take chances and for good luck.
Love is not appreciated if taken for granted.
You have to fight for it, like it was destined.
The important thing is not to give up.
Keep on trying till you fill the cup.
An empty one is an empty shelf.
A full one is the life it self.
Mystery and doubt are nothing but illusions.
With will, you can beat all the expectations.


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I Can Handle My Enemies.
  
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02-21-07

I liked it....good comeback from your introduction!


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The Lost Dreams - 02-21-07

Was a lil kid curious about the world
Was so naïve that too much was exposed
Is that the community I want to be in?
Is that the kind of life I want to be livin`?
I don’t think so…

A kid I was, a doctor wannabe
A man I am, accounting material
I ask myself, how can this be?
Is this my future's funeral?
In those two, there's no similarity
Incredible…
Doing something I don’t want is not me.
Doing what I'm doing don’t give me a fee
What to become of me, I don’t know
I may reach Trump's money, but satisfaction is low
I feel no pain but my heart is broken
What a world! Life's shocking`

I hate my life, it's not good.
Don’t ever run away, you always could.
Fighting for what you believe in, that, you should.
Even when say you can't, especially in the hood.
In the end I address the parents and say
Support your kid's dreams, even it's made out of clay
Kids, believe in yourselves if you may
And don’t forget, Life is a ray!


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Is It Ok? - 02-21-07

Hello, a word I think about now and then.
Hello, the starter of everything no matter when.
And yet I remember how you turn me upside down.
When I'm feeling alone and lonely, like a white cloud.
I wish I could act the brave hearted beast.
I know that's what you want, but I'm not a feast.
Is it OK, to just be myself?
Is it OK? Even though, I'm only an elf?

Today you asked me a favor.
I was so happy, so I pulled some strings.
Your request made me happier.
I'm now ready for all kind of things.
Is it OK, to sweep you of your feet?
Is it OK, to treat like elite?

The days go by, and I'm still in love with you.
Not caring for anything, I know what I'm feeling is true.
I hate small talks, I hate every thing lite.
I want to feel feelings, as deep as the night.
For that I say, and I you need this to read.
You're love is what I care for, what my soul really needs.


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02-21-07

Today I saw you, and didn't believe my eyes
You were so gorgeous, and yet so lively nice
Each day I try to talk to you, using what I feel
Daily I fail; I can't help the tremble, that's fear
I can't take this any more, I'm so depressed.
My feelings are growing, I need to attest.
What's the way to accomplish salvation?
What if I don't want to? I fear the vibration.
Man! I'm so confused right now
Don't know what to do or even how.

I'm loosing my temper; do you know me my love?
I guess I'm just hopeless; I'll keep wearing my gloves.
You would make my day, using only a sigh.
I'd hate to use on you, some cliché line.
I believe in simple love, the one who blossoms.
Others may think it sucks, but I say it's awesome.
In conclusion, I hope I'll survive until tomorrow.
I wish I could make a stand, and end the sorrow.
Then again, in love there's no wrong or right.
So good morning, good evening and good night.


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I liked it....good comeback from your introduction!

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loved it! especially how it gets all positive and conclusive at the end!
  
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