SO MUCH MORE(A SONG)

A smile that makes my heart race
A kiss that makes me weak
A hug that holds me up
Its all a part of what you are to me

Your all I needed
and all i really wanted
your my peace in a war zone
my angel in this hell
my life jacket in an ocean of pain
your all of this to me and oh so much more(chorus)

Please dont leave me
I cant live without you
without you im not even human
without you im a joke on mankind

Ive tried to give you the best
what more can i do
thats the question i ask
I would give you the world, if you asked
you deserve the best, and all that entitles

(chorus)

Your beauty out shines the sun
and every move you make is gracefull
when god made you he got perfect right

your perfect in every way
from the way you talk
to the way you walk
none compare, none even come close
to even maching your perfection

(chorus)

Im glad I can be a part of your life
just to share in your warmth is a gift from god
I hope to see you happy till death comes
and if within my power
stop even the grimreaper from taking your light out of this world
To be yours is my goal, my wish, will you have me?

FOR YOU

Your the only one whos noticed
everyone else shouts Loser
you say it aint true
I've heard it for so long I believe it now
Your my hope, my hero, my love
to you im not
but im still a loser, a loser alive
your changing me, thats good
youve made this peice of trash human
made me somthing more than a loser
for you ill do anything
to you im not a loser
to you, for you, im someone
in your eyes im more.....

MY PEICE OF HEAVEN

they see me there with her in my arms
Their shouts of PDA ringing in my ears
I dont care let them shout
When we lay like this, her and I, its heaven
I wish those moments would never end
If only we could lay there forever
That would be my heaven
for now i have to settle for a sample of that heaven
its not fair they constantly ruin it for us
why dont they understand, are they that blind?
maybe some day ill get my heaven

"so much more" works well if you like something that's just catchy and not super tough to understand. It lacks unique language, its a lot of cliches.

The other two seem a bit melodramatic and dont have much to really wow me with imagery either though.

You have a nack for keeping the language flowing well with its simplicity, keep going and see where that takes you.

more of my stuffs:

ID RATHER BE ASLEEP


Id rather be asleep
at there the dreams are sweet
id sleep all day
id sleep all night
but unfortanitly theres reality
this world I wake in
my grim reality
the truth I dont want to see
id rather be asleep
at least there the dreams are sweet

RAZORS EDGE


Weve all walked a Razors edge
that slim line between love and hate
Weve all fallen from time to time
to feel love or to feel hate
Weve all been cut by this Razors edge
to hate and love weve fallen
this Razors spilled our blood
just who will fall first
Its made us feel hate
made us hate our friends and despise our enemy's
Its made us feel love
love for those who hate us and for those we hate
its made us see another side
a side we dont want to see
o' Razors edge please let us be

UNTITLED SONG(A WORK IN PROGRESS)
/I've senn the world fall down around me twice before/ And it's all for you. its all for you/ And I dont know what to say but its all okay ,its all okay/ and daer god I dont know what to do, but run away.

/And now we're face to face, you macthed me pace for pace/ caught me in your grip agian. This time I cant run away/ It's still okay I wont run away, this time i'll stay/

you shot me down turned me around, and now your making me decide/ I cant run away,its not okay, dear god what do I do?/ I dont want to hurt anyone, I dont want hurt.

nows one of those times I need a second oppinion./I need a vioce of guidence/ Who to turn to, to ask what to do?



I can't run away, it's not okay, dear god god it's not okay, what to say, I have to stay/ make it right, not to night, maybe later, I'll fix it then/ Then never comes I need to fix it now/ fix it here, fix it now , I just need to fix it/

another untitled work that id forgot i wrote so im not sure how old it is.

If you could look into my mind,
and see all my dirty little thoughts
tell me would you still love me?

And if you fell into my arms tonight
would you sleep with me?
and if you woke up in my bed
tell me would you hold me?

I cant let you go my little angel
I want you by my side forever
and i cant get you outa my head
cause I love you - I need you

I'll be yours for ever and ever
And I wish with all my heart that you'll be mine
I'd love to see you in that dress one day
to watch you walk towards me
and if you do I'll give everything for you

It's cause I love you that I'm here for you
I'll do whatever it takes to be with you
Darling please say yes when that day comes
It's the words "I Do" I'm begging to hear from you
Its cause I love you I do this now

I cant let you go my little angel
I want you by my side forever
and i cant get you outa my head
cause I love you - I need you

And if you want me to
I'll follow you to the ends of this earth
And matter what you do
I'll be there for you
I'll be there for yo--u

It's the perfect way talk
and the way you walk with me
it's that and a million other things
that I love about you


I cant let you go my little angel
I want you by my side forever
and i cant get you outa my head
cause I love you - I need yo--u