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My thread if u care - 06-19-01

this is my thread here so i'll just post everything onto it so just keep checking this everytime it goes to the top of the boards if u care. Thanks



The Raven (2)

Out came the raven
Slayer of the land
It picks upon her bones
And rests upon his hand
The skull from which he drank
Made him just as wise
As wise as the blackened raven
Who rules the moon lit sky


But once the ravens gone
She'll lie upon the ground
Dripping in her agony
Shes silenced every sound
The raven becons
To his masters call
The dead shall rise one forbidden day
To heed the ravens call

  
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06-19-01

I always care.


Love SilverNymph***


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06-19-01

ahh sweetie..You know we care just as nypmhy chicky said..Anyways loved your poem..I always look forward in reading your work..You never fail to amaze me..Another stunner hun..Keep them comin'


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06-19-01

Aw. Hunny, we all care about ya! *HUGZ* And dont think otherwise! Luv ya man ^^ Catcha lataZ babe...


Take my love, Take my land
Take me where I can not stand.
I dont care, I'm still free,
You cant take the sky from me.
  
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06-19-01

you have such great poems NINE.


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06-20-01

:p hey baby............that thing that was being sent to u with the winking things was not me. its a virus that i cant see but get yelled at for. the virus is called choke.exe and if u accepted it, u git the virus to! but i found out how to gte rid of it. so plz dont b mad ok? byebyes baby. Love u always and forever.


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06-20-01

yea i know....dont bye bye babys me on my fuckin thread i'm trying be serious here for once. and yes u nearly loaded my comp full of shit which it doesnt need right now. so just like dont talk to me cuz i'm sick of it comin up
  
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06-20-01

HATE LIFE


Plant his cross by the grave just before the sun
He'll awake so cold,
Sit and cry morbid eyes overthrow you now
Hear the screams so loud


Take a walk down the hill and just take your pride
He's gone and he doesn't care
The devil's sat upon the stone staring down
Can you smell the smell in the air?


Nothings left I can't go on
Everything I do is always wrong
I don't even know who I am anymore
The names and sexuality they shout confuse me evermore


Does it really matter anymore
No one but me cares anymore
Death invites me like an ugly whore
A fire of desire, of hate
Friend are gone
Forgiveness...too late

  
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06-20-01

HANG FOREVER

Birth of a new day
Hate will always stay
Inside my rotting self forever


Hear the children cry
Another virgin dies
Death is slowly creeping nearer


Fuck it blind you'll see
Not all seems to be
As sweet as it was inside your twisted head
Didn't trust before
Shut out of every door
You will get down and beg for me


You turned your own back
The noose broke your own neck
The pain you put me through I'll always remember
Feel it now , as you hang forever

  
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06-20-01

THE FORGOTTEN GIRL


Due drips from the rose
Unto my mothers silent pose
Tears run down her face so slowly
Nothing had she ever done
A regretful life she did run
The next life will treat her worse surely


Taste of pain she sighs
Even her last breath she crys
The black rose is her only sure forgiveness


The thorns stick through her face
As blood marks disgrace
The whore lies upon her lovers grave


He is dead and gone
His songs still kill along
In her heart he shall not be forgotten

No one ever cared
About this forgotten girl
She will die on her own
Sink into the sand
The whore that gave birth to me will die by my own hand
Death doesn't bark it only bites
The gravestone of her lover
Marks the forgotten girls remembered night

  
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06-22-01

Hey hun, havent talked to you for awhile. Howz it going? *HUGZ* Well, talk to ya lataZ babe. Nice poems, BTW ^^


Take my love, Take my land
Take me where I can not stand.
I dont care, I'm still free,
You cant take the sky from me.
  
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06-23-01

Beautiful as always NINE, take care hunny. I miss talking to you angel
I am sorry I haven't been here, and again after work on Sunday I am going back to my mates flat to live again until everything at home works out that means no internet connection until the end of the month when he gets it installed

Love you NINE.

Love and hugs, SilverNymph*** (even when I am not here I am thinking of you hunny, please don't forget me.)


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06-23-01

hi silver. Yea i've missed talking to you besides missing seeing you post. I hope everythings going to be ok. Don't worry i'll forget you , you've done to much for me I can't forget you. I'll mail you tonight. Thanks fir replying and take care
  
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06-23-01

If you are still here and want to chat for a bit go to the chat room hunny.


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06-27-01

THE CREATOR


So , what your something now?
So , what are you special now?
Noboby cares for the places I hold scars
Why can't I kill them...


You wanted the nails in your wrists..

Take my life...
Go!
Just take my life...
Go!


No , you are nothing
No , your not special
Everyone looks now
Please shy away their eyes...


You wanted the nails on your ankles..


I freeze
So cold
The breeze
Through my soul
That you claim
The last time
You died for your own sins
You did not die for mine


You wanted the crown of thorns...

I'm the hater
Of my creator

  
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06-27-01

Oh, hunny. That last one was well done. It touched me. Do you mind if I show it to friends who arnt on darkforum? I know sevral people who would just love that poem. Till then, lataZ sweets.. *hugglez and snugglez*


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06-28-01

CYANIDE SOLUTION


I won't be around to see you die
So while your here why should I try
To be better than you in everyway
When your always the winner while you stay


Thank god they are here in capsule form
One simple swallow and lives left torn
Then I'll be here to see you die
You'll be gone so then I'll try


Cause you have messed my population
Entered the egg and started multiplication
Others like you , you've started producin'
More types to kill
Cyanide is the solution

  
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07-01-01

You are a really great poet. I can relate to your work really well. Keep it up. You are a really great poet. I can relate to your work really well. Keep it up.


"The human soul denies it's existence."
  
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07-02-01

The Fallen



The moonlight lit the silver path
To the black rose garden where you stand
And as the fog attached itself to you
You did manage to find my hand


As I stared straight through your ivory eyes
Words of love I told to your face
But you only shyed away your head
Why I was innocent in our embrace


No words were needed
No tears you shed
For your actions
Spoke what you said


And you faded from me like mist
All this time you had been lying
And so I lay with the fallen
As you've left me here dying
  
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07-02-01

thats soo sad..I'm sorry you had to go through that nine ..great job and keep them comin..


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