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My Poetry - 01-23-02

If only for myself, I will share these words. This is my first thread, and we will see how it works out. I'll... just write.

*Fake*

My life is deadened
Darkened, unwanted
Forgotten and bleeding
In wistful darkness
Shattered behind these
Walls that are red
Of crimson
Hiding me from feeling
Anything
Trapping words to
Treasure the silence
That is killing you softly
Hurting buried inside
A burnt, black heart
Which blinds you in
Fake beauty
For you seem something that
Could never be
For I am ugliness
Death in purple scars
That trace my veins
Drown happiness
Scarlet pain falling
Swiftly to the floor
In satisfaction of forgotten
Memories
Hold this pain down inside
Till it swallows me
And I am forgotten in
Days that have torn us apart
Forget me little girl lost
Feared and drowning
In the darkness of
The average day


I walk around with a knife in my back, talk about a bad day I live a life like that.
  
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Silently - 01-23-02

Pain, betrayal
Breathless in words
Spoken regretfuly
Lost in their eyes
Smiling at one another
As I scream silently
Bleeding lonely
Lost love and time
Trust and reality
In stripes of life
Falling fast from
Sad eyes
Scars trapping voices
That threaten to drown me
Even as I sink fast
Into a wonderless death
Down the rabbit hole
Into hell
All I find
Anger, distress, mistrust
No beauty, no light, no love
Dying for I can't fight
Weak, so weak, so strong
In ragged strips of torn flesh
That sing a mournful song
To the night mood which
Whispers secrets and lies
Lies that wrap me in
Warm false security
A straight jacket hiding me
From sanity
I can not live, not breathe
Can not move
Shattered, trembling
Ripped by the seams
Tumbled carelessly
Hoping there would be
A safety net to catch my fall
But all there ever is
Is pain and death and lies
And lack of life
That has jaded me


I walk around with a knife in my back, talk about a bad day I live a life like that.
  
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01-23-02

I am extremely impressed, we should tag team some time.


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Thank you - 01-23-02

Thank you Sik Simon... Sounds like a plan. Heh.


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