Darkforum.com - Dark Stories, Dark Art, Poetry, Photography, Debates and Discussions
Home Register FAQ
Go Back   Darkforum.com - Dark Stories, Dark Art, Poetry, Photography, Debates and Discussions > The Pen > Poetry
Reload this Page Merciful Death...
Poetry Discuss Merciful Death... in the The Pen forums; Here's a poem I found someplace, You might wanna read it...BTW, I changed a few lines of it when I copied it last week, so If you've ...

Register and remove some of the ads
Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
  (#1) Old
Hotaru is Offline
Domine Dolorosa
Hotaru
 
Hotaru's Avatar
 
Posts: 262
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: May 2001
Location: Beyond the Star-Gates
Zodiac Sign: Scorpio
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 8,376
   
Merciful Death... - 05-31-01

Here's a poem I found someplace, You might wanna read it...BTW, I changed a few lines of it when I copied it last week, so If you've heard it before, that's whay it's different...

Ah, so you wish to die
I heard your call...
I am here mon cher...
Look at me
I shall take thy fear away
And turn it into passion...
And as that passion grows...
I shall drain the last drop
Of bittersweet, life-giving blood from thy body
I will look you in the eye
And watch as death claims thee
I shall take thy soul unto me
I AM death, mon cher
Embace me...


Proud member of the SLLA..(Secret Lesbian Lovers Association)

For you . . .
@)------

The sun gives us light, but the moon provides inspiration.
If you look at the sun without shielding your eyes,
you'll go blind. If you look at the moon without
covering your eyes, you'll become a poet.
--Serge Bouchard


Always remember-- Love Never Faileth.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#2) Old
Hotaru is Offline
Domine Dolorosa
Hotaru
 
Hotaru's Avatar
 
Posts: 262
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: May 2001
Location: Beyond the Star-Gates
Zodiac Sign: Scorpio
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 8,376
   
05-31-01

HUNTER'S MOON


The soft moonlight
Shines down in surreal beams
Drawing out the creatures of thenight

Bloodcurdling howls peirce the silence of the night air
Making the skin of mortals craws
As they cower at home in their beds

None of them are safe until the dawn
And at midnight all hope is gone for those who have not returned home
The dark children of the night prowl the streets

I feel sharp fangs in my mouth
Sleek and sharp
Yearning to bite, to tear, to rend...

I see his wild eyes and
I watch his moonlit metamorphosis
He is my beauteous wolf

We, the children of the darkness
Dance and fight and hunt
In the darkness of the Hunter's Moon

But at dawn we will retreat
Back to our homes and lairs and tombs
Until the next samhain's eve...


Proud member of the SLLA..(Secret Lesbian Lovers Association)

For you . . .
@)------

The sun gives us light, but the moon provides inspiration.
If you look at the sun without shielding your eyes,
you'll go blind. If you look at the moon without
covering your eyes, you'll become a poet.
--Serge Bouchard


Always remember-- Love Never Faileth.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#3) Old
Unloved_Angel is Offline
Registered User
Unloved_Angel
 
Unloved_Angel's Avatar
 
Posts: 104
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: Apr 2001
Location: Indiana
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 916
   
05-31-01

hey, did you write those? They're pretty kewl.


"You live, you die. Everything in-between probably isn't worth remembering. At least not for me."
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#4) Old
Hotaru is Offline
Domine Dolorosa
Hotaru
 
Hotaru's Avatar
 
Posts: 262
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: May 2001
Location: Beyond the Star-Gates
Zodiac Sign: Scorpio
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 8,376
   
05-31-01

I wrote "Hunter's moon", but not merciful death...I found that one somewhere, and I wanted to show everyone, 'cuz it's sooo kewl...kinda...raunchy...


Proud member of the SLLA..(Secret Lesbian Lovers Association)

For you . . .
@)------

The sun gives us light, but the moon provides inspiration.
If you look at the sun without shielding your eyes,
you'll go blind. If you look at the moon without
covering your eyes, you'll become a poet.
--Serge Bouchard


Always remember-- Love Never Faileth.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#5) Old
Hotaru is Offline
Domine Dolorosa
Hotaru
 
Hotaru's Avatar
 
Posts: 262
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: May 2001
Location: Beyond the Star-Gates
Zodiac Sign: Scorpio
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 8,376
   
05-31-01

Okay, I know that this it my third poem here today, but I'm feeling inspired...


MY VAMPIRIC LOVE

There is a sorrow in his eyes
An eternity of pain
lies heavily on his icy heart

I see a flash of silver,
Feel the sweet pain
As he feeds hungrily on my power


Our souls seem to merge,
Becoming one.
Indecribable etscacy...

He drains my life-force
And I love it...I yearn for more
I beg to be bitten again

He leaves me there
Empty...
Dissatisfied...

I watch him disappear into the mist
I know he won't return, they never do
Not once they have what they want..

He hears my pleas and turns around
His coal-dark eyes are wet.
And I weep for his pain.



Proud member of the SLLA..(Secret Lesbian Lovers Association)

For you . . .
@)------

The sun gives us light, but the moon provides inspiration.
If you look at the sun without shielding your eyes,
you'll go blind. If you look at the moon without
covering your eyes, you'll become a poet.
--Serge Bouchard


Always remember-- Love Never Faileth.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#6) Old
Unloved_Angel is Offline
Registered User
Unloved_Angel
 
Unloved_Angel's Avatar
 
Posts: 104
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: Apr 2001
Location: Indiana
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 916
   
05-31-01

Wow that one was good. I'm having trouble getting inspiration, or at least I have the pst couple of days, where do you get your inspiration to write these Killer! Poems?


"You live, you die. Everything in-between probably isn't worth remembering. At least not for me."
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#7) Old
Hotaru is Offline
Domine Dolorosa
Hotaru
 
Hotaru's Avatar
 
Posts: 262
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: May 2001
Location: Beyond the Star-Gates
Zodiac Sign: Scorpio
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 8,376
   
05-31-01

My inspiration comes from kissing my half-vampire, half-human boyfriend...and from a vampiric-erotic dream I had last night... besides, I'm hanging around in black clothes with a red light on in my room...


Proud member of the SLLA..(Secret Lesbian Lovers Association)

For you . . .
@)------

The sun gives us light, but the moon provides inspiration.
If you look at the sun without shielding your eyes,
you'll go blind. If you look at the moon without
covering your eyes, you'll become a poet.
--Serge Bouchard


Always remember-- Love Never Faileth.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#8) Old
Hotaru is Offline
Domine Dolorosa
Hotaru
 
Hotaru's Avatar
 
Posts: 262
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: May 2001
Location: Beyond the Star-Gates
Zodiac Sign: Scorpio
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 8,376
   
New Poem... - 05-31-01

I wrote this for my aforementioned BF, who BTW, was abused as a kid...tell me what you think, okay?

THE DARK FAERIE; (originally known as "Angel")

She knows everything about you
Your past, present. and future
She feels your pain.

She hears your cries of dispair
She sees your nightmares
She is drowning in your sorrow.

She touches at your heart and mind,
Understands your plight
She weeps for you.

Every cut,
Every bruise,
Every tear,
THey all stab her like knives

Sadness marrs her delicate feature
Darkness threatens to snuff her light
Fear grips her pure heart.

At night,
Whilst you sleep
She whispers of her love for you

She knows everything about you
Your past, your present, your future
And she weeps because she is powerless and cannot help you.


Proud member of the SLLA..(Secret Lesbian Lovers Association)

For you . . .
@)------

The sun gives us light, but the moon provides inspiration.
If you look at the sun without shielding your eyes,
you'll go blind. If you look at the moon without
covering your eyes, you'll become a poet.
--Serge Bouchard


Always remember-- Love Never Faileth.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#9) Old
Dragons_Cry is Offline
Lord Of Dragons
Dragons_Cry
 
Dragons_Cry's Avatar
 
Posts: 514
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: Apr 2001
Location: North
Zodiac Sign: Capricorn
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 7,277
   
06-01-01

well done...


*Deus Et Natura No Faciunt Frusta*

  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#10) Old
daraku is Offline
Registered User
daraku
 
daraku's Avatar
 
Posts: 10
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: Jun 2001
Location: provo utah
Zodiac Sign: Aquarius
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 778
   
06-01-01

beautifully done poems!


"Rage against the dieing of the night, for the darkness within ourselves is what makes us who we are. If you look into the darkness, you will find the light."
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#11) Old
Hotaru is Offline
Domine Dolorosa
Hotaru
 
Hotaru's Avatar
 
Posts: 262
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: May 2001
Location: Beyond the Star-Gates
Zodiac Sign: Scorpio
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 8,376
   
... - 06-01-01

*blushing* you...like my work? Wow. That's never happened before...usually, people read my poems and attempt to call the nearest mental institution...


Proud member of the SLLA..(Secret Lesbian Lovers Association)

For you . . .
@)------

The sun gives us light, but the moon provides inspiration.
If you look at the sun without shielding your eyes,
you'll go blind. If you look at the moon without
covering your eyes, you'll become a poet.
--Serge Bouchard


Always remember-- Love Never Faileth.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#12) Old
~BlooDy MarY~ is Offline
::x::DeAd InSiDe::x::
~BlooDy MarY~
 
~BlooDy MarY~'s Avatar
 
Posts: 168
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: Apr 2001
Location: Alberta, Canada
Zodiac Sign: Virgo
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 6,071
   
06-01-01

Hey... I like your poems! "Merciful Death", that sounds like words that are said in "Interview with the vampire." Have you ever seen that movie or read the novel? It is one of my favorite stories!

"Merciful Death, how you love your precious guilt"


This is the way your life will end
This is the way your life will end
This is the way your life will end

Not with a bang,
but a whimper.
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#13) Old
Hotaru is Offline
Domine Dolorosa
Hotaru
 
Hotaru's Avatar
 
Posts: 262
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: May 2001
Location: Beyond the Star-Gates
Zodiac Sign: Scorpio
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 8,376
   
06-01-01

I...um...I didn't write "merciful death". I found it, and wanted to show everyone, because it's just so cool. N-E-ways, here is a new poem, it's called "Dark Love" I hope you guys read it...

DARK LOVE

He is my damnation.
He is my saviour.
A demon or pehaps an angel
Maybe both.
He is a dark, wing'ed creature
That fell from the sky
And into my life.

He is evil
He is holy
My heart and soul are his.

His coal-dark eyes
That burn with a hidden power
Hypnotize me
Pulling me into their inky blackness.

His strong arms
They encircle me.
He pulls me in
To his realm of magick and mystery.

He teases me,
Pulling me in
Then pushing me away
I feel so lost.

He pulls at my heartstrings
And makes me his puppet
A marrionette with no will of her own
But I continue to love him

He is holy
And he is evil
My heart and soul
Belong only to him...


Proud member of the SLLA..(Secret Lesbian Lovers Association)

For you . . .
@)------

The sun gives us light, but the moon provides inspiration.
If you look at the sun without shielding your eyes,
you'll go blind. If you look at the moon without
covering your eyes, you'll become a poet.
--Serge Bouchard


Always remember-- Love Never Faileth.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#14) Old
EbonyDragyn is Offline
Legolas' Dragyn
EbonyDragyn
 
EbonyDragyn's Avatar
 
Posts: 4,109
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: Jan 2001
Location: stray dogs
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 30,080
   
06-01-01

Love the poems and love the name...


sailor scout of death and destruction with her glaive of silence right?

Sailor Saturn

Hotaru Tomoe


LOLZ. GTFO.
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#15) Old
Hotaru is Offline
Domine Dolorosa
Hotaru
 
Hotaru's Avatar
 
Posts: 262
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: May 2001
Location: Beyond the Star-Gates
Zodiac Sign: Scorpio
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 8,376
   
06-01-01

Quote:
Originally posted by EbonyDragyn
Love the poems and love the name...


sailor scout of death and destruction with her glaive of silence right?

Sailor Saturn

Hotaru Tomoe

HELL YEA!

Hotaru Tomoe, that's me! ("Silent Firefly" in japanese)...heh, I even look like her, at least, that's what all my guyfriends say...


Proud member of the SLLA..(Secret Lesbian Lovers Association)

For you . . .
@)------

The sun gives us light, but the moon provides inspiration.
If you look at the sun without shielding your eyes,
you'll go blind. If you look at the moon without
covering your eyes, you'll become a poet.
--Serge Bouchard


Always remember-- Love Never Faileth.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#16) Old
daraku is Offline
Registered User
daraku
 
daraku's Avatar
 
Posts: 10
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: Jun 2001
Location: provo utah
Zodiac Sign: Aquarius
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 778
   
06-02-01

It is so rare to find a another Sailor Moon fan on boards like this, letalone that can write so beautifully.


"Rage against the dieing of the night, for the darkness within ourselves is what makes us who we are. If you look into the darkness, you will find the light."
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#17) Old
Hotaru is Offline
Domine Dolorosa
Hotaru
 
Hotaru's Avatar
 
Posts: 262
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: May 2001
Location: Beyond the Star-Gates
Zodiac Sign: Scorpio
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 8,376
   
how flattering... - 06-03-01



How flattering...Everyone is just so nice to me here...

I wonder why everone finds it so hard to belive that there are SM fans everywhere, even in a dark place like this...

I chooses the name HOTARU because it represents my personality, describes my appearance, and because that silence glave is just sooo KEWL!!!

Err...If ya'll don't mind, I'd like some CONSTRUCTIVE critisism on my poetry, so I can improve upon it and make it even better...

Bai. peeps


Proud member of the SLLA..(Secret Lesbian Lovers Association)

For you . . .
@)------

The sun gives us light, but the moon provides inspiration.
If you look at the sun without shielding your eyes,
you'll go blind. If you look at the moon without
covering your eyes, you'll become a poet.
--Serge Bouchard


Always remember-- Love Never Faileth.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#18) Old
Hotaru is Offline
Domine Dolorosa
Hotaru
 
Hotaru's Avatar
 
Posts: 262
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: May 2001
Location: Beyond the Star-Gates
Zodiac Sign: Scorpio
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 8,376
   
Inspiration has struck! - 06-04-01

Here ya go, a brand-new poem! heh heh...This was written by two of my multiple personalities; my sweet, innocent side, and the demon-like, evil side of me...


Light And Shadow

You will love me
You will hate me
I am in your dreams and nightmares


I am your deepest secrets
I am your darkest fears
I haunt you at night


I am your every desire
I am your brightest hopes
I bring the morning light

I see your tears
And I dry them
I feel your pain
And I comfort you


I know your weaknesses
And I exploit them
I hear your dreams
And I turn them to darkness


We are all you want
We are all you need
You love us
You hate us
But you cannot escape us

I am you
You are me
And we are one


Proud member of the SLLA..(Secret Lesbian Lovers Association)

For you . . .
@)------

The sun gives us light, but the moon provides inspiration.
If you look at the sun without shielding your eyes,
you'll go blind. If you look at the moon without
covering your eyes, you'll become a poet.
--Serge Bouchard


Always remember-- Love Never Faileth.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#19) Old
Unloved_Angel is Offline
Registered User
Unloved_Angel
 
Unloved_Angel's Avatar
 
Posts: 104
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: Apr 2001
Location: Indiana
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 916
   
06-04-01

[color=orange][/b]I think we are going to continue to WOW each other Hotaru, that was GREAT!
Much better than anything I could ever write!
Definately keep up the writing, WOW!! it was awesome. [/b][color]


"You live, you die. Everything in-between probably isn't worth remembering. At least not for me."

Last edited by Unloved_Angel : 06-04-01 at 20:22.
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
  (#20) Old
Unloved_Angel is Offline
Registered User
Unloved_Angel
 
Unloved_Angel's Avatar
 
Posts: 104
Gallery: 0
Comments: 0
Join Date: Apr 2001
Location: Indiana
Rating: Not Rated
Credits: 916
   
06-04-01

hey how do you get the colored letters? I can't get it to work!


"You live, you die. Everything in-between probably isn't worth remembering. At least not for me."
  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in Technorati