looping

looping
Broken taken stripped and screaming
the Quiet portal stems into me
blinking dreaming not quite thinking
Deeper echoes hide a stranger me.

i move i'm not moving
i speak i'm not speaking into
everything is looping
everything is creaking
i want to but i never will

i feel i'm not feeling
i'm listening i'm not listening to you
nothing is healing
nothing is finishing
everything is standing still


locked in place the black is seeping
am i just paranoid am i just paranoid
Drowning closing slowly repeating never releasing
i see the distant void.

i'd just like to say to anyone planning on editing your post... don't do it.. it just makes doubles... damnit

that was good dude

well... i'm glad you liked it