The longing.

Dark, silent and upon first glance
i saw that her heart was cold.
no emotion, no sense of feelings.
I could but not look away; Glancing deeper
into here ever winding mystery.
How could one such as this feel nothing.

I stand and weep for her, a cold stone
is all that remains of my once
loving and sweet love.
You took her away from me.
And i fade away as each day passes
till i hold you tonight once more.

Where are u.

11 years have passed since that grave day
When you looked at me for the last time
and said goodbye.
I never saw you again.
But everyone tells me that they can see you in me. I wish that you would come out of me and we can walk and play together once more. I see you in my mind and in the streets on the empty faces of the people around me. I miss u more than words i
can speak. I love you Dad.

Wow ....I am so happy you finally found the time to start your thread huni and i'm so happy you can finally share this beautiful work with people here. It's great and i hope to see some more.
Love Nat
xXx

My.......

The first time me eyes met you it was love
the last time my eyes met you there were tears
my heart was twisted and broken.
Your hand wrapped around it like five thorn's
digging there way to the centre, it bleeds love;
All the love i gave and all the tears i cried ment nothing to you.
You hurt me in a way that i will never see again
it is black where you hurt me now. the thorns have done
there work. I can never love and lose again. why sara....why?

that was filled with lots of emotion it was truly magnific

wow.... short...but powerful....i'll have to keep on reading your stuff, because so far, i like what i see

Thank i will try and keep the true raw emotion coming.

I like your first piece of work, very emotional and honest.

Post a few more so I can enjoy please.

Hope to talk to you some time

Lost......

The dusk in my eyes
brings little hope to my heart,
through the time i have passed onwards
ever searching for her.
Bound by love yet blind by sorrow
She was so close and i let slip
her soft hand to fade.
never more to hear her speak those word
that brought my heart such joy.
were have you gone,
and where am i now.

that was as usual beautifully filled with emotion u made my heart weep

I cannot but write poems filled with emotion.

The pain.....

Dark, alone and suffering
What did i do worng to you
i forgive but never forget
you had my feelings and now they are gone
you abused me and left me to die
to carry this sadness for all to see.
What you have done has left a pain that
cannot be replenished with words.
I have to live with what you have done
and i will never forget. never.

*prints out, puts up on her wall next to fave poems* i LOVE this one... i can relate to it... that might not be a good thing...but yeah, its a REALLY good piece!!!!

You're on a roll tonight and a damm good role it is for producing such brilliant pieces and a bad one for bringing up all these feelings for you...i wish there were buses running to yarm still or a train cos i wanna give u a hug

Want a free avatar for bringing us all such wonderfull poetry?

just pm me if you want one

keep up then good work

That one time.....

Alone we walked together u and i
it seemed like the night would last
it turned cold and dark as out lips touched
my heart was alive but my mind not
i could not think my heart was yours
from that day on.
I have lived in the shadows since that day
wanting, hoping just for a chance
to give my heart to you.
But i dont think you would take it
not after all that has happend.

Yeah a hug would be good right now

My poems are just my way of being able to let go of situations and carry on. I have them there if i need to remember. I hope that i touch some of your hearts with them as well.

my hearts more than touched...it be wounded!!! i almost don't like reading your work because its painful... but...its so....enrapturing...i must read on... keep it real, K?

Black

The rose that looks over me in disspare
the blackness that shrouds my heart
the feelings that i hide from you
do you remeber my last words
they were i love you