Little children running around,
And I don’t even care.
I’d like to take a razor blade,
And shave off all their hair.
But that would be cruel,
And not very kind.
For someone to think it,
Must be out of their mind.
But still I sit and wonder here,
About it going through.
To see their bald little heads in tears,
Would make me a happy Jew…

That's really disturbing and has a lot of potential. Keep up the work, as long as you enjoy it and it's your thoughts that's all that matters. But I really enjoyed that