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Sex Let Me Rape You (me latest piece) - 03-11-07

It's a re-write of an old one. It's about consensual rape.




Let Me Rape You


The flowers lie:
Paper leaves,
Tied down like...
You.

In streets of cultivated hearts,
A fragrance of sickness—
Of conflicted knees,
Fractured pane glass orgasms
Not yet broken.

Buy the Lachrymose Bouquet.
The advert is ours
Self-inflicted, self-tasted:
Don't Buy Me, Don't Try Me
Just lift me and throw me aside.

The stock cars roll,
Shuffling, clicking, along the lines
Coupled 24/7
But empty, partly empty
Dimmed pairs of eyes stare out
Into the shadows for the stranger
Who's standing right behind.

Subway stranger
Lollipop man
Jehovah's Witness
Bus Stand stander
Sunglass watcher

Here in Shadowland:
I'm not sorry I kept you waiting.


©BrettConway2007



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Another one! Sort of. - 03-16-07

"Dans mon cerveau là boite, comme dans maison de fous,

A tourmenté chat, mortel, doux et charmant.

Quand il pleure, aucun ne peut l'entendre.

Quand il rit, il caille le sang."



Cherise Bauradalle



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In my brain there limps, as if in a lunatic asylum
A tormented cat, mortal, soft and charming.
When it cries, none can hear it.
When it laughs, it curdles the blood.


This isn't exactly my own creation...more of a bastardisation of one my fav poets.

I have too much time on my hands.



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I really liked the first one. Some strong imagery, fun rhythms, and overall nice theme. Kudos!


I was masturbating
just contemplating
the color of suicide
  
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